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(作文是话题作文“目标”,用“断?”做题目有犹疑感,结合文章的内容,改用“向着太阳飞翔”为题会更贴合“目标”这一话题。) 蔚蓝的天空中,我欢快地飞着。虽然一端的线已断了,也许人们会为我叹息,但我认为,我并没有断。(这句话不易让人理解,且与文章中心内容不够吻合,宜改为“但我并没有断,我只是朝自己的梦想更靠近了一步。”) 很久以前,我只是一只普通的风筝,至少在还没上色之前。我的主人,是一位技艺高超的扎风筝的艺人。他是位和蔼的老人,每天跟他要风筝的孩子实在太多了,可他又不忍让孩子失望,只好在家将一切时间利用起来:扎风筝,画风筝……
(A composition is a topic “composition”. There is a sense of doubt about using “shut?” to make a topic. Combining the content of the article, using the theme of “flying toward the sun” will better fit the “target” topic.) In the blue sky I flew cheerfully. Although one end of the line has been broken, perhaps people will sigh for me, but I think I have not broken. (This sentence is not easy to understand, and it is not consistent with the content of the article center. It should be changed to “but I did not break it. I just took a step closer to my dream.”) A long time ago, I was just an ordinary kite. , at least before it has been painted. My master is a highly skilled kite artist. He is a well-to-do old man. There are too many children who want to kite with him every day. But he can’t bear to disappoint his children. He has to use all his time at home: he can fly kites and draw kites...