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◎文体概述
节假日活动涉及春节、元旦、国庆节、植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活节、母亲节等多个中西方节假日的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等多种庆祝活动，寒暑假活动、社会实践活动、青少年志愿者活动的安排，以及参加这些活动的经历和感受等。以下内容为高考的出题方向：
1.直接描述某一个中西方节日的活动安排;
2.如何有意义地度过节假日;
3.节假日去某地度假，回来后写信表示感谢，以回忆的形式体现假日活动;
4.以图片的形式体现节日的盛况，要求考生进行描述;
5.某个节日或寒暑假要来了，准备举行一个活动，以通知的形式告知大家活动安排;
6.对节日的庆祝活动的态度，如现在中国很多地方流行过“洋”节，你对此有何看法？
◎写作模板
模板范文
The Mid?Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals， it has been enjoying great popularity. Usually， no matter how far away or how busy we are， we will try to return home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky， we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits， sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities， we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.
◎经典句型
National Day is coming.国庆节快到了。
National Day falls on Tuesday this year.今年国庆节是在星期二。
We celebrated New Years Day with a dance party.我们举行舞会来庆祝元旦。
Mothers Day is a celebration in honor of all mothers.母親节是一个向所有母亲表达敬意的节日。
Merry Christmas and best wishes for a happy New Year！圣诞快乐，并祝您新年快乐！
Wish you happiness and prosperity in the
coming year！祝你新的一年幸福成功！
Wish you success in your career and happiness of your family！祝你事业成功，家庭美满！
To welcome the coming Spring Festival， people spend days cleaning the houses， preparing different kinds of foods， buying new clothes， especially for children.为了迎接即将到来的春节，人们会花几天打扫房间，准备各种食物，买新衣服，尤其是给孩子们。
The Spring Festival is coming/drawing near/approaching. It is an important festival for Chinese， when all the family members get together.春节即将到来，对中国人而言，这是全家团圆的重要节日。
Nowadays Chinese begin to follow some Western festivals such as Christmas.现在，中国人开始过起了一些西方节日，如圣诞节。
Thanksgiving Day is the most truly American of the national holidays in the United States.感恩节是美国国定假日中最地道的美式节日。
◎典题链接
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣，并请你介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1.是哪个中国传统节日;
2.中国人怎么庆祝这个节日;
3.你为什么喜欢这个节日。
注意：
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. Yours，
Li Hua
【试题解读】
1.审题立意
该篇书面表达的命题要求用书信的体裁进行写作，同时结合提纲类作文的形式。体裁是考生较为熟悉的，再加上该篇习作要求考生自己谈谈最喜欢的中国传统节日，话题贴近考生实际生活。
该篇习作从话题上来看，侧重考查考生对中国传统文化的理解，更是从侧面教育广大考生重视传统文化，保护优秀传统习俗。考生在写作前要通读题目要求，把握所给三点要点，分别叙述但也要注意全文段落间的衔接与过渡。行文要结构明了，详略得到，庆祝节日的方式应该稍有侧重。考生还要注意内容的丰富，尝试多使用长短句，用多变的结构和短语去丰富内容，增加亮点。
2.写作要点
（1）表明自己最喜欢的节日;
（2）谈谈人们是如何庆祝该节日的;
（3）阐述自己喜欢该节日的原因;
（4）祝愿和期盼回复。
【佳作赏析1】
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Among the various festivals in China， the Mid?Autumn Festival is my favorite， which falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. ① On this significant day， we can see a very bright and round moon， which means reunion and happiness. ② Therefore， no matter how far and how busy we are， we will do our utmost to come back home to have a big meal and appreciate the full moon with our family members. ③
Personally， the reason why I like this festival is that autumn is a golden season. ④ It stands for harvest and growth. ⑤ So in Chinese culture， the festival has a special meaning.
Best wishes. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
亮點分析：本篇习作结构清晰，语言清新自然，长短句交替使用，结构严谨，精彩纷呈，充分显示出作者扎实的语言功底。另外，文章中定语从句、让步状语从句和多个高级词汇与短语，如significant、utmost、appreciate、golden season等的使用使得全文一气呵成，都为全文成为一篇优秀的习作奠定了坚实的基础。
①which引导的定语从句对提升句子档次，丰富内容起到促进作用。
②这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面的a very bright and round moon。
③no matter how...引导让步状语从句，从句中的do our utmost to do意为“竭尽我们全力做某事”，此处反映出中秋节在国人心目中的重要性。
④Personally引出作者的观点，过渡自然。该句结构复杂，why引导的是一个定语从句，而is后又跟有一个由that引导的表语从句。
⑤该句是作者表述喜欢中秋节的一个原因，即“秋天代表着收获，代表着成长”，有特殊的意义。
【佳作赏析2】
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Its widely acknowledged that China observes different kinds of festivals every year. ①As far as I am concerned， the Spring Festival really gives me the deepest memory. ②
With Chinese New Year approaching， each family will become busy preparing for it. ③Adults will clean the house thoroughly to welcome a good luck. They will also purchase many goods for the festival. On New Years Eve， we will get together to watch the Spring Festival Gala， enjoy the splendid fireworks display and wait for the New Years bell anxiously. What an exciting moment！ ④
When it comes to the Spring Festival， I can list out countless reasons for my preference
节假日活动涉及春节、元旦、国庆节、植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活节、母亲节等多个中西方节假日的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等多种庆祝活动，寒暑假活动、社会实践活动、青少年志愿者活动的安排，以及参加这些活动的经历和感受等。以下内容为高考的出题方向：
1.直接描述某一个中西方节日的活动安排;
2.如何有意义地度过节假日;
3.节假日去某地度假，回来后写信表示感谢，以回忆的形式体现假日活动;
4.以图片的形式体现节日的盛况，要求考生进行描述;
5.某个节日或寒暑假要来了，准备举行一个活动，以通知的形式告知大家活动安排;
6.对节日的庆祝活动的态度，如现在中国很多地方流行过“洋”节，你对此有何看法？
◎写作模板
模板范文
The Mid?Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals， it has been enjoying great popularity. Usually， no matter how far away or how busy we are， we will try to return home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky， we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits， sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities， we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.
◎经典句型
National Day is coming.国庆节快到了。
National Day falls on Tuesday this year.今年国庆节是在星期二。
We celebrated New Years Day with a dance party.我们举行舞会来庆祝元旦。
Mothers Day is a celebration in honor of all mothers.母親节是一个向所有母亲表达敬意的节日。
Merry Christmas and best wishes for a happy New Year！圣诞快乐，并祝您新年快乐！
Wish you happiness and prosperity in the
coming year！祝你新的一年幸福成功！
Wish you success in your career and happiness of your family！祝你事业成功，家庭美满！
To welcome the coming Spring Festival， people spend days cleaning the houses， preparing different kinds of foods， buying new clothes， especially for children.为了迎接即将到来的春节，人们会花几天打扫房间，准备各种食物，买新衣服，尤其是给孩子们。
The Spring Festival is coming/drawing near/approaching. It is an important festival for Chinese， when all the family members get together.春节即将到来，对中国人而言，这是全家团圆的重要节日。
Nowadays Chinese begin to follow some Western festivals such as Christmas.现在，中国人开始过起了一些西方节日，如圣诞节。
Thanksgiving Day is the most truly American of the national holidays in the United States.感恩节是美国国定假日中最地道的美式节日。
◎典题链接
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣，并请你介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1.是哪个中国传统节日;
2.中国人怎么庆祝这个节日;
3.你为什么喜欢这个节日。
注意：
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. Yours，
Li Hua
【试题解读】
1.审题立意
该篇书面表达的命题要求用书信的体裁进行写作，同时结合提纲类作文的形式。体裁是考生较为熟悉的，再加上该篇习作要求考生自己谈谈最喜欢的中国传统节日，话题贴近考生实际生活。
该篇习作从话题上来看，侧重考查考生对中国传统文化的理解，更是从侧面教育广大考生重视传统文化，保护优秀传统习俗。考生在写作前要通读题目要求，把握所给三点要点，分别叙述但也要注意全文段落间的衔接与过渡。行文要结构明了，详略得到，庆祝节日的方式应该稍有侧重。考生还要注意内容的丰富，尝试多使用长短句，用多变的结构和短语去丰富内容，增加亮点。
2.写作要点
（1）表明自己最喜欢的节日;
（2）谈谈人们是如何庆祝该节日的;
（3）阐述自己喜欢该节日的原因;
（4）祝愿和期盼回复。
【佳作赏析1】
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Among the various festivals in China， the Mid?Autumn Festival is my favorite， which falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. ① On this significant day， we can see a very bright and round moon， which means reunion and happiness. ② Therefore， no matter how far and how busy we are， we will do our utmost to come back home to have a big meal and appreciate the full moon with our family members. ③
Personally， the reason why I like this festival is that autumn is a golden season. ④ It stands for harvest and growth. ⑤ So in Chinese culture， the festival has a special meaning.
Best wishes. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
亮點分析：本篇习作结构清晰，语言清新自然，长短句交替使用，结构严谨，精彩纷呈，充分显示出作者扎实的语言功底。另外，文章中定语从句、让步状语从句和多个高级词汇与短语，如significant、utmost、appreciate、golden season等的使用使得全文一气呵成，都为全文成为一篇优秀的习作奠定了坚实的基础。
①which引导的定语从句对提升句子档次，丰富内容起到促进作用。
②这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面的a very bright and round moon。
③no matter how...引导让步状语从句，从句中的do our utmost to do意为“竭尽我们全力做某事”，此处反映出中秋节在国人心目中的重要性。
④Personally引出作者的观点，过渡自然。该句结构复杂，why引导的是一个定语从句，而is后又跟有一个由that引导的表语从句。
⑤该句是作者表述喜欢中秋节的一个原因，即“秋天代表着收获，代表着成长”，有特殊的意义。
【佳作赏析2】
Dear Jim，
Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Its widely acknowledged that China observes different kinds of festivals every year. ①As far as I am concerned， the Spring Festival really gives me the deepest memory. ②
With Chinese New Year approaching， each family will become busy preparing for it. ③Adults will clean the house thoroughly to welcome a good luck. They will also purchase many goods for the festival. On New Years Eve， we will get together to watch the Spring Festival Gala， enjoy the splendid fireworks display and wait for the New Years bell anxiously. What an exciting moment！ ④
When it comes to the Spring Festival， I can list out countless reasons for my preference