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学生们都知道要使用高级词汇及较复杂句型来提高写作的档次分，但在实际操作时，却对高级词汇及较复杂句型没有把握而感到茫然．以至于错误地认为使用一些“偏”、“难”、“怪”的词汇或“啰嗦”、“重复”、“冗长”的复合句就是使用高级词汇及较复杂句型。怎样才能做到“高级但不卖弄”、“多变但不出错”、“简洁但不残缺”、“连贯但不牵强”、“复杂但不模糊”，“文高而不含意”，下面请欣赏2006年高考范文中的“闪光点”，让你零距离地感受和体会此技巧。
一、使用高级词汇及最佳搭配(划线单词为本节所指，黑体为其它类型“闪光点”)
1.We borrow books and do some readingin the libray．(全国卷1)
2.I promise 1 will do my best to providebest service for WAG．(全国卷2)
3.Believing we all need help from eachother,I appreciate friends'help．(北京卷)
4.It was rather annoying．(天津卷)
5.I've compared the 2 universities from3 aspects.
6.I sum up the difference．(上海卷)
7.I will work hard and creatively.
8.I'll take the opportunity to makefriends…(江苏卷)
9.What's more．people have easy ac-cess to the Internet, which enables them tosend and receive e-mails whenever they like(广东卷)
10.…and I'll reply to you as soon as I can.
11.I'll seek help from my teacher．(重庆卷)
12.They sbould introduce the Chineseculture and history to foreigners so that theymay know China better and never say or doanything that harms the image of our mother-land．(江苏卷)
13.I hope this cartoon can wake theirvirtue anti make our life better．(山东卷)
14.Sichuan Province is rich in touristattractions and euloys many world-famous placesof interest(四川卷)
15.These big changes really make agreat difference in OUF daily life(广东卷)
二、使用了精炼的介词短语及with复合结构
1.He is looking at the laptop in greatcuriosity,unable to figure out what it is(北京卷)
2.I'm writing the letter in the hopethat you can consider these problems andmake some improvements．(天津卷)
3.To his delight,his grandpa agreed(辽宁卷)
4.So,instead of givivg us answers im-mediately，he encourages us to think by our-selves whenever he outs forward questions．(湖南卷)
5.Some are in favor of staying at home．(陕西卷)
6.According to the rules,every studentcan borrow up to 5 books each time．(全国卷1)
7.Our libray is in the corner oftheschool,with a beautiful garden in front of itand our classroom building behind it.(全国卷1)
8.Because of them，our communicationbecomes quicker，cheaper and more con-venient．(广东卷)
三、使用非谓语动词(短语)
1.I'm Wang Shan,a girl of 16,presently attending Beijing Yanggnang MiddleSchool.(北京卷)
2.Grandpa and the children were veryhappy to see the bird flying away in the sky.(辽宁卷)
3.Secondly,they should stick to theirposts,offering good services,satisfying anyreasooable needs and being ready to helpthose in difficulty,and never fail to do theirduty.(江苏卷)
4.I think I can stay at home,readingqmckly in a situation of my own.(浙江卷)
5.Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.(湖南卷)
6.The child found a book Civic Virtuelying on the ground.(山东卷)
7.Would you be so kind as to send itback to me?(安徽卷)
8.In the past,people kept in touchwith each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.(广东卷)
四、恰当的承接短语及插入语
1.The girl,on the other hand,is totallydifferent.(北京卷)
2.First,there were too many,ads in thefilm.Second the Sounds of the film were toolond.(天津卷)
3.Besides,the film is usually more in-teresting and it is easier to follow.(浙江卷)
4.Meanwhile,the language in the bookis possiby more lively and beautiful.(浙江卷)
5.…and what's more,I'm able to bet-ter understand the author's ideas. In a word,to read the original work is better than to seethe film based on it.(浙江卷)
6.However，bad eating habits are stillvery common among us students.(福建卷)
7.He should not only know "what",butalso understand "why".(湖南卷)
8.Otherwise,the North University ischeaper.(上海卷)
9.There are many tourist attractions andwell known places of interest in SichmanProvince,such asJiuzhaigou and Dujiang Ir-rigation project.(四川卷)
10.In addition,the nice weather andconvenient transportation here will make yourtrip a pleasant one.I'm sure you'll have agood time here.(四川卷)
五、it当替代词的句型
1.In my opinion,it would be muchbetter to stay at home.(陕西卷)
2.It would be diffcult for people to getout quickly．(天津卷)
六、使用被动句
1.It's reported that over 100,000people will be chosen as volunteers for the2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.(江苏卷)
2.Recently a survey has been done tofind out the reading interests of senior schoolstudents.(湖北卷)
3.Today,many old people are ignoredby their children.(江西卷)
七、使用主从复合句、并列句
1.I love like I love Mother nature;Ilove peace,and I hate any form of violence.(北京卷)
2.Although it will absorb only 10freshmen,I call get 20 extra scores.(上海卷)
3.The bird was unhappy though if hadenough food and water.(辽宁卷)
4.However,others prefer to go out fortraveling since it can increase their knowledgeand broaden their horizons.(陕西卷)
5.He is such a learned person that weall admire him very much.(湖南卷)
6.When you get inslde,you will seemany shelves full of books on different sub-jects.(全国卷1)
7.I'm 28 years old and have beenteaching in a high school since I gracIuatedfrom the university.(全国卷2)
八、使用定语从句及名词性从句
1.The reason is that it takes less timeto understand the whole story.(浙江卷)
2.To keep fit,we should have varioushealthy diets,which generally include properamount of fish,meat,vegetables,fruit as wellas main food.
3.The survey shows that more than halfof the students like to rearl news most.(湖北 卷)
4.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beau-tiful lakes,of which the water is clear andlooks colorful.(四川卷)
5.I'm a high school student in Beijing,where the Winter Asian Games will start.(全国卷2)
九、感叹句、虚拟语气、倒装句及特殊句型
1.What a wonderful world of"why"heleads us to!(湖南卷)
2.And if something terrible should hap-pen, it would be difficult for people to get outquickly.(北京卷)
3.They say,the easier the means ofcommunication are,the less emotion peoplegive.(广东卷)
4.Only in this way can we have enoughenergy to study better.(福建卷)
十、复杂长句
1.For example,mobile phone,whichcan be taken everywhere,has gradually sub-stituted for the fixed public phone and nowwe mostiy use e-mails on the Internet to ex-change ideas and feelings instead of hand-writing letters.(广东卷)
2.I would like to join the Peace &Friendship Summer Camp since it would be agreat opportunity to make friends with youngpeople from different countries and learnabout their cultures.(北京卷)
一、使用高级词汇及最佳搭配(划线单词为本节所指，黑体为其它类型“闪光点”)
1.We borrow books and do some readingin the libray．(全国卷1)
2.I promise 1 will do my best to providebest service for WAG．(全国卷2)
3.Believing we all need help from eachother,I appreciate friends'help．(北京卷)
4.It was rather annoying．(天津卷)
5.I've compared the 2 universities from3 aspects.
6.I sum up the difference．(上海卷)
7.I will work hard and creatively.
8.I'll take the opportunity to makefriends…(江苏卷)
9.What's more．people have easy ac-cess to the Internet, which enables them tosend and receive e-mails whenever they like(广东卷)
10.…and I'll reply to you as soon as I can.
11.I'll seek help from my teacher．(重庆卷)
12.They sbould introduce the Chineseculture and history to foreigners so that theymay know China better and never say or doanything that harms the image of our mother-land．(江苏卷)
13.I hope this cartoon can wake theirvirtue anti make our life better．(山东卷)
14.Sichuan Province is rich in touristattractions and euloys many world-famous placesof interest(四川卷)
15.These big changes really make agreat difference in OUF daily life(广东卷)
二、使用了精炼的介词短语及with复合结构
1.He is looking at the laptop in greatcuriosity,unable to figure out what it is(北京卷)
2.I'm writing the letter in the hopethat you can consider these problems andmake some improvements．(天津卷)
3.To his delight,his grandpa agreed(辽宁卷)
4.So,instead of givivg us answers im-mediately，he encourages us to think by our-selves whenever he outs forward questions．(湖南卷)
5.Some are in favor of staying at home．(陕西卷)
6.According to the rules,every studentcan borrow up to 5 books each time．(全国卷1)
7.Our libray is in the corner oftheschool,with a beautiful garden in front of itand our classroom building behind it.(全国卷1)
8.Because of them，our communicationbecomes quicker，cheaper and more con-venient．(广东卷)
三、使用非谓语动词(短语)
1.I'm Wang Shan,a girl of 16,presently attending Beijing Yanggnang MiddleSchool.(北京卷)
2.Grandpa and the children were veryhappy to see the bird flying away in the sky.(辽宁卷)
3.Secondly,they should stick to theirposts,offering good services,satisfying anyreasooable needs and being ready to helpthose in difficulty,and never fail to do theirduty.(江苏卷)
4.I think I can stay at home,readingqmckly in a situation of my own.(浙江卷)
5.Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.(湖南卷)
6.The child found a book Civic Virtuelying on the ground.(山东卷)
7.Would you be so kind as to send itback to me?(安徽卷)
8.In the past,people kept in touchwith each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.(广东卷)
四、恰当的承接短语及插入语
1.The girl,on the other hand,is totallydifferent.(北京卷)
2.First,there were too many,ads in thefilm.Second the Sounds of the film were toolond.(天津卷)
3.Besides,the film is usually more in-teresting and it is easier to follow.(浙江卷)
4.Meanwhile,the language in the bookis possiby more lively and beautiful.(浙江卷)
5.…and what's more,I'm able to bet-ter understand the author's ideas. In a word,to read the original work is better than to seethe film based on it.(浙江卷)
6.However，bad eating habits are stillvery common among us students.(福建卷)
7.He should not only know "what",butalso understand "why".(湖南卷)
8.Otherwise,the North University ischeaper.(上海卷)
9.There are many tourist attractions andwell known places of interest in SichmanProvince,such asJiuzhaigou and Dujiang Ir-rigation project.(四川卷)
10.In addition,the nice weather andconvenient transportation here will make yourtrip a pleasant one.I'm sure you'll have agood time here.(四川卷)
五、it当替代词的句型
1.In my opinion,it would be muchbetter to stay at home.(陕西卷)
2.It would be diffcult for people to getout quickly．(天津卷)
六、使用被动句
1.It's reported that over 100,000people will be chosen as volunteers for the2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.(江苏卷)
2.Recently a survey has been done tofind out the reading interests of senior schoolstudents.(湖北卷)
3.Today,many old people are ignoredby their children.(江西卷)
七、使用主从复合句、并列句
1.I love like I love Mother nature;Ilove peace,and I hate any form of violence.(北京卷)
2.Although it will absorb only 10freshmen,I call get 20 extra scores.(上海卷)
3.The bird was unhappy though if hadenough food and water.(辽宁卷)
4.However,others prefer to go out fortraveling since it can increase their knowledgeand broaden their horizons.(陕西卷)
5.He is such a learned person that weall admire him very much.(湖南卷)
6.When you get inslde,you will seemany shelves full of books on different sub-jects.(全国卷1)
7.I'm 28 years old and have beenteaching in a high school since I gracIuatedfrom the university.(全国卷2)
八、使用定语从句及名词性从句
1.The reason is that it takes less timeto understand the whole story.(浙江卷)
2.To keep fit,we should have varioushealthy diets,which generally include properamount of fish,meat,vegetables,fruit as wellas main food.
3.The survey shows that more than halfof the students like to rearl news most.(湖北 卷)
4.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beau-tiful lakes,of which the water is clear andlooks colorful.(四川卷)
5.I'm a high school student in Beijing,where the Winter Asian Games will start.(全国卷2)
九、感叹句、虚拟语气、倒装句及特殊句型
1.What a wonderful world of"why"heleads us to!(湖南卷)
2.And if something terrible should hap-pen, it would be difficult for people to get outquickly.(北京卷)
3.They say,the easier the means ofcommunication are,the less emotion peoplegive.(广东卷)
4.Only in this way can we have enoughenergy to study better.(福建卷)
十、复杂长句
1.For example,mobile phone,whichcan be taken everywhere,has gradually sub-stituted for the fixed public phone and nowwe mostiy use e-mails on the Internet to ex-change ideas and feelings instead of hand-writing letters.(广东卷)
2.I would like to join the Peace &Friendship Summer Camp since it would be agreat opportunity to make friends with youngpeople from different countries and learnabout their cultures.(北京卷)