第十册习作二要求:这是老师批改过的一篇作文(略)。老师在“总批”和“眉批”中,对这篇作文的优缺点发表了自己的看法,提出了修改意见。好文章是改出来的,我们要学会修改文章。请你把这篇作文认真读几遍,参照老师的意见,运用修改符号加以修改。今天上午,老师告诉我们一个好消息:下午要举行拔河比赛。教室里立刻沸腾起来。我高兴得连中午饭也没吃好。好不容易熬到了下午。老师把全班同学分为两队,同学 The tenth book exercises two requirements: This is an essay edited by the teacher (omitted). The teacher expressed his opinion on the merits and shortcomings of the essay in his “Total Approve” and “Mei Ding”, and put forward his suggestions for amendment. Good articles are changed out, we have to learn to modify the article. Please read this essay carefully several times, referring to the teacher’s advice and modifying it with amending the symbol. This morning, the teacher told us the good news: The tug-of-war will be held in the afternoon. The classroom immediately boil up. I’m glad I did not even eat well at lunch. Finally reached the afternoon. The teacher divides the classmates into two groups, classmates