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61. to win 62. tears 63. excited 64. but （also） 65. wonderfully
66. an 67. has been 68. thought 69. beginning 70. what
短文改错
Last summer， I went to work as a volunteer teacher in a small village， that is located in the south of our country. The children there
which
were all from poorer families， so they didn’t have nice clothes to
poor
wear or enough food∧eat. They had to do much housework as our
to their
parents had gone to work in cities to make the money. Although they
live a hard life， they were eager to learn less about the outside world.
lived more
When asking about their dreams， they said they hoped they could
asked
return to their small villages after graduating from college. Thus，
village
they can make their hometown more beautifully.
beautiful
One possible version：
Dear John，
I’m writing to discuss with you about how to make friends.
Everybody needs friends， so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. To make friends， the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides， never judge a person only by his appearance. What’s more， you should think more of others than of yourself.
Always remember， a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out， as the saying goes， “A friend in need is a friend indeed”.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ping
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61. have lost 62. that 63. it 64. to say 65. cheerfully 66. thought 67. more 68. but 69. challenges 70. beginning
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Dear Ron，
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon.
excited
Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous
school with∧long history. We have lots of experienced teachers and
a
excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings， one for seniors and
equipment teaching
the other for juniors. There is too one lab building and one dorm building. also
Beside Chinese， maths， English， physics or chemistry， we still have some
Besides and
electives. The students can choose wherever they like to attend. We love
whatever
their school. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
our
Yours，
Linda
One possible version：
Here I am going to share my favorite book with all of you in class. The book is My Life Story， which was created by an American writer—Helen Keller.
It described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist. In the book， she wrote that she hadn’t been able to see， hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months. When she was seven years old， she knew Miss Sullivan， her good teacher. Then， Miss Sullivan helped her learn how to write words. Later， she wrote and published many famous works in her life.
I like the book best because it shows us a universal truth： Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it！
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61. successful 62. going 63. when 64. seized 65. to do 66. is hurt 67. for 68. Moved 69. was 70. and
短文改錯
When I was a senior student in high school I had∧teacher called
a
Mary. She taught English but she really had an important effect to me.
and on
She was full of love and enthusiasm. She has our class make poster and
had posters
hang them around the school. She taught we that one act of kindness
us
could go a long way. However， Mary passed away just a couple of years before after a long battle with brain cancer. I’ll never forget how a
ago what
wonderful and sweet lady she was. I am truly blessed to have been
known her. I am going to be a teacher like her and I’ll always
remembering her kindness.
remember
One possible version：
Dear Tom，
I’m glad you trust me and tell me about your trouble. I shall be pleased to talk over the matter with you.
As we know， getting on well with our classmates is very important. The harmonious relationship between classmates makes us in a relaxed mood， which in return has a great effect on our study.
As for the shortcomings your classmate pointed out， I think you should critically accept them. If you do have the shortcomings， you should thank your classmate， and then correct them， which can help you do better in the future. For something like “too thin” or “too short”， just ignore it. In addition， you’d better have a talk with him/her. I hope my advice will prove more or less helpful.
Yours，
Li Ming
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61. struggling 62. to get 63. that 64. sold 65. had hidden 66. eyes 67. happily 68. with 69. greatest 70. the
短文改错
We were having such a bad weather in London. Robert suggested
spend the Christmas week in an Italy seaside town we had visited in the
spending Italian
previous summer. We thought this idea over∧a day or two and then
for
made up our mind to go. When I asked my brother whether I could lend
minds borrow
some money from him， he advised me not to go somewhere at that time.
anywhere
But he finally agree to help me. And he gave me some advices and
agreed advice
information about our trip from London to Italy， or the type of clothes to
and
take.
One possible version：
The Value of Time
A proverb says， “Time is money”. In my opinion， however， time is even more valuable than money. When money is spent， we can earn it back. But when time is gone， it will never return.
It is a pity that there are a lot of people who don’t know the importance of time. They never realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.
As students， we should make full use of our time to do useful things. We should spend most of our time on our studies. Moreover， we should get into the good habit of saving time.
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61. suddenly 62. for 63. thanking 64. picked 65. has been 66. the 67. importance 68. varieties 69. mountainous 70. where
短文改錯
Are you afraid of snake？ If you are， you’re not lonely. But farmers
snakes alone
like them. That’s why they eat insects and mice which eat a lot of crops.
because
They protect crops indirectly. Snakes are covering with hard and flat
covered
pieces， which feel dry and coolly. Many snakes look like the things
cool
around them. Some snakes have brown bands， that look like the leaves
which
that had fallen to the ground where the snakes live. But the others do have
have bright bands， which∧black， red， yellow， or white. When a snake
are
grows， its skin comes off. Sometime you can see it on the ground.
Sometimes
One possible version：
Dear David，
Thanks for your letter. You asked me something about the music in my life. Let me tell you briefly.
I like many kinds of music， such as classical music， Chinese folk music， and American country music， but my favorite music is light music. Whenever I am in trouble， the soft melody will make me feel relaxed.
Modern popular music such as hip-hop， rap， blues， and rock&roll isn’t my cup of tea. It is too loud and very difficult for me to understand！ I can’t stand the strong beat， which nearly makes me mad！
In conclusion， music plays a very important part in my life. Just like meals and sleep， I can’t live without music.
Yours，
Wang Hua
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61. recently 62. various 63. to be 64. if/whether
65. saying 66. which 67. are found 68. figures 69. the
70. will drop
短文改錯
Our school newspaper is looking at an editor for its English edition.
for
The job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose suitable English articles from other newspaper， magazines or the Internet for us students.
newspapers
The other is to pick out articles from those that are written by the
which
students in our school and edit them for use. We hoped that the person
hope
can meet the following requirements： First， he is willing to devote some of his spare time to serve others. Second， it’s necessary for him
serving
to be good at both English or fine arts. Beside， the ability to use the
and Besides
computer is not important. Those who is interested in the job， please
are
get∧touch with the Students’ Union this week.
in
One possible version：
After-class Activities
Nowadays， after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
In our school， there are various kinds of activities， for example， arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge， they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions. To students， you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you； to schools， they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Dear friends， please take an active part in after-class activities to make your school life colorful.
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61. as 62. is made 63. to breathe 64. important 65. which/that 66. ways 67. so 68. jumping 69. will fall 70. dirty
短文改錯
Keep a good habit is very important. But I am a little lazy. Lazy
Keeping
people usually felt it is hard to keep a good habit. A week ago， I went
feel
to play the basketball with some of my classmates. It was already about
ten o’clock when I got home. I was tired and went straight to bed instead∧taking a bath first. The next morning， we went to take a bath
of I
and then went to school. However， it was cold that morning so I didn’t
and
dry my hairs. I got a cold. I felt terribly the whole day and I started to
hair terrible
regret what I had done. If I had taken a bath immediately while as I got
when
home， I wouldn’t have got a cold. See， a good habit are really important.
is
One possible version：
As more and more people use the Internet to chat or communicate， a new thing called Net Language comes into being.
I prefer to use Net Language. First， Net Language is simple and convenient. I can express my feelings and opinions directly and easily. Second， Net Language can make people’s communication interesting. For example， 3Q means “thank you”， and OIC means “Oh， I see”.
But we should view Net Language critically. Some of the useful Net Language may stay alive. After all， Net Language is not regular， which can only be used in certain areas. We should use normal language in our daily life especially in public places and the media. We students shouldn’t use Net Language as written language in our compositions.
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61. who/that 62. reasons 63. the 64. central 65. filled 66. but 67. watching 68. warmth 69. to chat 70. better 短文改錯
Dear Tom，
I was glad to hear from you but I would like to tell you anything
and something
about health. Yesterday we had an activity about health problems and a famous nutrition expert∧invited to give us a lecture. The expert spoke
was
of some terrible illnesses as well as their reason. Show us some pictures，
reasons Showing
he explained the serious diseases caused by eating too much food with lots of fat， oil， and sugar. They learned more about the dangers of junk
We
food through an activity. After the lecture， we had a heat discussion.
the heated
We decided to say goodbye to junk food and took more exercise to
take
make our bodies much more stronger than ever. I hope you can tell me more about your story.
Best wishes，
Zhang Lei
One possible version：
Music or Noise
Recently， some people did morning exercises to music early in the morning， which dissatisfied other people. They complained that the music， like loud noise， disturbed their sleep.
As we all know， music plays an important role in our lives. Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Listening to light music also makes us feel happy and comfortable.
However， as the saying goes， every coin has two sides. Music at wrong places or time may be noise to others， especially with your loud music. If your music becomes others’ noise， it can destroy your relationship with your neighbors.
In my opinion， people may do morning exercises at other places or at other periods of time. In one word， whatever we do， we should think about other people’s feelings.
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31—35 CAADC 36—40 EGDAB 41—45 CDDBD
46—50 ADBDC 51—55 DBCDA 56—60 BDCBB
61. to win 62. tears 63. excited 64. but （also） 65. wonderfully
66. an 67. has been 68. thought 69. beginning 70. what
短文改错
Last summer， I went to work as a volunteer teacher in a small village， that is located in the south of our country. The children there
which
were all from poorer families， so they didn’t have nice clothes to
poor
wear or enough food∧eat. They had to do much housework as our
to their
parents had gone to work in cities to make the money. Although they
live a hard life， they were eager to learn less about the outside world.
lived more
When asking about their dreams， they said they hoped they could
asked
return to their small villages after graduating from college. Thus，
village
they can make their hometown more beautifully.
beautiful
One possible version：
Dear John，
I’m writing to discuss with you about how to make friends.
Everybody needs friends， so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. To make friends， the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides， never judge a person only by his appearance. What’s more， you should think more of others than of yourself.
Always remember， a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out， as the saying goes， “A friend in need is a friend indeed”.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ping
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31—35 DCDCA 36—40 BDGAF 41—45 DABDC
46—50 ABDAC 51—55 CABCC 56—60 DBACA
61. have lost 62. that 63. it 64. to say 65. cheerfully 66. thought 67. more 68. but 69. challenges 70. beginning
短文改錯
Dear Ron，
I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon.
excited
Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous
school with∧long history. We have lots of experienced teachers and
a
excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings， one for seniors and
equipment teaching
the other for juniors. There is too one lab building and one dorm building. also
Beside Chinese， maths， English， physics or chemistry， we still have some
Besides and
electives. The students can choose wherever they like to attend. We love
whatever
their school. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
our
Yours，
Linda
One possible version：
Here I am going to share my favorite book with all of you in class. The book is My Life Story， which was created by an American writer—Helen Keller.
It described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist. In the book， she wrote that she hadn’t been able to see， hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months. When she was seven years old， she knew Miss Sullivan， her good teacher. Then， Miss Sullivan helped her learn how to write words. Later， she wrote and published many famous works in her life.
I like the book best because it shows us a universal truth： Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it！
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16—20 CABBC 21—25 ADABC 26—30 ABCDA
31—35 BBCCA 36—40 CGFEA 41—45 BBCDC
46—50 DBDCA 51—55 ACDCD 56—60 ACBDB
61. successful 62. going 63. when 64. seized 65. to do 66. is hurt 67. for 68. Moved 69. was 70. and
短文改錯
When I was a senior student in high school I had∧teacher called
a
Mary. She taught English but she really had an important effect to me.
and on
She was full of love and enthusiasm. She has our class make poster and
had posters
hang them around the school. She taught we that one act of kindness
us
could go a long way. However， Mary passed away just a couple of years before after a long battle with brain cancer. I’ll never forget how a
ago what
wonderful and sweet lady she was. I am truly blessed to have been
known her. I am going to be a teacher like her and I’ll always
remembering her kindness.
remember
One possible version：
Dear Tom，
I’m glad you trust me and tell me about your trouble. I shall be pleased to talk over the matter with you.
As we know， getting on well with our classmates is very important. The harmonious relationship between classmates makes us in a relaxed mood， which in return has a great effect on our study.
As for the shortcomings your classmate pointed out， I think you should critically accept them. If you do have the shortcomings， you should thank your classmate， and then correct them， which can help you do better in the future. For something like “too thin” or “too short”， just ignore it. In addition， you’d better have a talk with him/her. I hope my advice will prove more or less helpful.
Yours，
Li Ming
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16—20 AACBC 21—25 CDDCA 26—30 DDCCB
31—35 ACBDC 36—40 FCEBD 41—45 CBCBD
46—50 DACBC 51—55 DBDBA 56—60 BCCDB
61. struggling 62. to get 63. that 64. sold 65. had hidden 66. eyes 67. happily 68. with 69. greatest 70. the
短文改错
We were having such a bad weather in London. Robert suggested
spend the Christmas week in an Italy seaside town we had visited in the
spending Italian
previous summer. We thought this idea over∧a day or two and then
for
made up our mind to go. When I asked my brother whether I could lend
minds borrow
some money from him， he advised me not to go somewhere at that time.
anywhere
But he finally agree to help me. And he gave me some advices and
agreed advice
information about our trip from London to Italy， or the type of clothes to
and
take.
One possible version：
The Value of Time
A proverb says， “Time is money”. In my opinion， however， time is even more valuable than money. When money is spent， we can earn it back. But when time is gone， it will never return.
It is a pity that there are a lot of people who don’t know the importance of time. They never realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.
As students， we should make full use of our time to do useful things. We should spend most of our time on our studies. Moreover， we should get into the good habit of saving time.
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16—20 CBBAB 21—25 BDCAD 26—30 ABBDA
31—35 CCBAA 36—40 GEFAD 41—45 BACDC
46—50 ACBAD 51—55 BCABC 56—60 ADBBA
61. suddenly 62. for 63. thanking 64. picked 65. has been 66. the 67. importance 68. varieties 69. mountainous 70. where
短文改錯
Are you afraid of snake？ If you are， you’re not lonely. But farmers
snakes alone
like them. That’s why they eat insects and mice which eat a lot of crops.
because
They protect crops indirectly. Snakes are covering with hard and flat
covered
pieces， which feel dry and coolly. Many snakes look like the things
cool
around them. Some snakes have brown bands， that look like the leaves
which
that had fallen to the ground where the snakes live. But the others do have
have bright bands， which∧black， red， yellow， or white. When a snake
are
grows， its skin comes off. Sometime you can see it on the ground.
Sometimes
One possible version：
Dear David，
Thanks for your letter. You asked me something about the music in my life. Let me tell you briefly.
I like many kinds of music， such as classical music， Chinese folk music， and American country music， but my favorite music is light music. Whenever I am in trouble， the soft melody will make me feel relaxed.
Modern popular music such as hip-hop， rap， blues， and rock&roll isn’t my cup of tea. It is too loud and very difficult for me to understand！ I can’t stand the strong beat， which nearly makes me mad！
In conclusion， music plays a very important part in my life. Just like meals and sleep， I can’t live without music.
Yours，
Wang Hua
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16—20 CCCAC 21—25 ACCAB 26—30 DCBDB
31—35 BCADC 36—40 FEGDB 41—45 ABCDA
46—50 BADBC 51—55 ACADD 56—60 CCBAB
61. recently 62. various 63. to be 64. if/whether
65. saying 66. which 67. are found 68. figures 69. the
70. will drop
短文改錯
Our school newspaper is looking at an editor for its English edition.
for
The job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose suitable English articles from other newspaper， magazines or the Internet for us students.
newspapers
The other is to pick out articles from those that are written by the
which
students in our school and edit them for use. We hoped that the person
hope
can meet the following requirements： First， he is willing to devote some of his spare time to serve others. Second， it’s necessary for him
serving
to be good at both English or fine arts. Beside， the ability to use the
and Besides
computer is not important. Those who is interested in the job， please
are
get∧touch with the Students’ Union this week.
in
One possible version：
After-class Activities
Nowadays， after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
In our school， there are various kinds of activities， for example， arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge， they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions. To students， you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you； to schools， they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Dear friends， please take an active part in after-class activities to make your school life colorful.
1—5 BCBCA 6—10 CBBCC 11—15 ACCBB
16—20 ACBAC 21—25 DACAC 26—30 ADACA
31—35 ADCBC 36—40 CEAFG 41—45 BDABC
46—50 CDBAD 51—55 CACCA 56—60 DDBBC
61. as 62. is made 63. to breathe 64. important 65. which/that 66. ways 67. so 68. jumping 69. will fall 70. dirty
短文改錯
Keep a good habit is very important. But I am a little lazy. Lazy
Keeping
people usually felt it is hard to keep a good habit. A week ago， I went
feel
to play the basketball with some of my classmates. It was already about
ten o’clock when I got home. I was tired and went straight to bed instead∧taking a bath first. The next morning， we went to take a bath
of I
and then went to school. However， it was cold that morning so I didn’t
and
dry my hairs. I got a cold. I felt terribly the whole day and I started to
hair terrible
regret what I had done. If I had taken a bath immediately while as I got
when
home， I wouldn’t have got a cold. See， a good habit are really important.
is
One possible version：
As more and more people use the Internet to chat or communicate， a new thing called Net Language comes into being.
I prefer to use Net Language. First， Net Language is simple and convenient. I can express my feelings and opinions directly and easily. Second， Net Language can make people’s communication interesting. For example， 3Q means “thank you”， and OIC means “Oh， I see”.
But we should view Net Language critically. Some of the useful Net Language may stay alive. After all， Net Language is not regular， which can only be used in certain areas. We should use normal language in our daily life especially in public places and the media. We students shouldn’t use Net Language as written language in our compositions.
1—5 BBCCA 6—10 BACCA 11—15 ABBCC
16—20 CAABC 21—25 CADDB 26—30 DCCAC
31—35 BACAD 36—40 GBAEC 41—45 DBCCA
46—50 BDBBA 51—55 DAACC 56—60 DBDAC
61. who/that 62. reasons 63. the 64. central 65. filled 66. but 67. watching 68. warmth 69. to chat 70. better 短文改錯
Dear Tom，
I was glad to hear from you but I would like to tell you anything
and something
about health. Yesterday we had an activity about health problems and a famous nutrition expert∧invited to give us a lecture. The expert spoke
was
of some terrible illnesses as well as their reason. Show us some pictures，
reasons Showing
he explained the serious diseases caused by eating too much food with lots of fat， oil， and sugar. They learned more about the dangers of junk
We
food through an activity. After the lecture， we had a heat discussion.
the heated
We decided to say goodbye to junk food and took more exercise to
take
make our bodies much more stronger than ever. I hope you can tell me more about your story.
Best wishes，
Zhang Lei
One possible version：
Music or Noise
Recently， some people did morning exercises to music early in the morning， which dissatisfied other people. They complained that the music， like loud noise， disturbed their sleep.
As we all know， music plays an important role in our lives. Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Listening to light music also makes us feel happy and comfortable.
However， as the saying goes， every coin has two sides. Music at wrong places or time may be noise to others， especially with your loud music. If your music becomes others’ noise， it can destroy your relationship with your neighbors.
In my opinion， people may do morning exercises at other places or at other periods of time. In one word， whatever we do， we should think about other people’s feelings.