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小学课文《花潮》,节选自李广田1962年5月26日发表于《人民日报》上的一篇记游散文。 在这篇节选的散文中,可谈以下三个特点。 一、前后顶接,突出中心。作者为了揭示作品所要描写的对象,首先按照空间顺序,讲了“昆明有个圆通寺,寺后就是圆通山”。而后对比了圆通山的过去和现在,过去是一座“荒山”,现在是一个“公园”,这种对比非常鲜明。说了圆通山上的公园之后,便排迭有序地写了这里“有亭,有台,有池,有榭,有花,有树,有鸟,有兽”,罗列起来,丰富多彩,真不愧是一个具备了一定规模的公园,作品从这些“亭、台、池、榭、
Primary school text “Huchao”, excerpt from Li Guangtian May 26, 1962 published in the “People’s Daily” on a travel note prose. In this essay, you can talk about the following three characteristics. First, before and after the top, highlighting the center. In order to reveal the objects to be depicted in the works, the author first tells the story of “Yuantong Temple in Kunming and Yuantong Mountain in the back of the temple” according to the spatial order. Then compare the past and present Yuantong Mountain, the past is a “barren hills”, is now a “park”, this contrast is very clear. Having said the park on the Yuantong Mountain, I wrote it in an orderly manner. “There are kiosks, a terrace, a pond, a pavilion, flowers, trees, birds, and beasts.” Is indeed a park with a certain scale, works from these "kiosks, Taiwan, pool, pavilion,