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文章的主体部分构建了“蜘蛛”的“象”,“蜘蛛”的三次经历,其“象”内容丰富,寓意层层深入。但是,首段和末段应删除, 不要将“我所悟”成为一种俗套;标题太泛,应实在,可改为“蜘蛛”。
The main part of the article constructs the “image” of “spider” and the three experiences of “spider”. Its “image” is rich in content and implies deeper layers of meaning. However, the first paragraph and the last paragraph should be deleted. Do not use “my understanding” as a cookie cutter; the title is too general and should be real, and can be changed to “spider”.