《济南的冬天》是老舍先生创作的一篇散文,长期被语文教材选用,仔细分析和研究,对现在的作文教学具有重要的启迪作用。一、仔细观察生活,大量占用材料这篇散文是老舍在英国讲学六年之后回到济南写的,不同的环境给了作者强烈的感受。正因如此,作者才怀着回国后对祖国河山的热爱之情,经过仔细观察,把济南的冬天写得富有灵气。例如,作者在简明地概括了济南冬天的特点后,就用大量的笔墨,把 “Winter in Jinan” is an essay created by Mr. Lao She and has long been selected by Chinese textbooks for careful analysis and research, which has an important enlightenment on the present composition teaching. First, a careful observation of life, a lot of occupation of materials This essay is Lao She returned to Jinan after six years of lectures in the United Kingdom wrote, different environments gave the author a strong feeling. It is precisely for this reason that the author cherished the love of the motherland and rivers and mountains after returning home and carefully observed it and wrote the winter in Jinan with a reiki. For example, after briefly summarizing the characteristics of Jinan winter, the author used a large amount of ink