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要求：你的未来生活会是什么样？你将来想要从事什么职业？请以My Life in the Future为题，描述一下你未来的工作和生活。
In the future， I think I will be a teacher. I will teach in the countryside. Because the kids there are very poor， I want to help them get better education.
As a teacher， I think I will try my best to teach them well. I will help them to open their eyes and know more about the world. I will also be friendly with them. And I will be their best friend. After class， we will play games together.
In my free time， I will go for a walk around the country. I will enjoy fresh air and the beauty of the countryside. On holidays， I will travel around the world. And I will buy some gifts for my students. This is my dream life in the future. I hope it will come ture.
简评：文章开篇点题说明自己所从事的职业是什么。作者想象力丰富，时态运用准确，整篇文章运用将来时来描述自己未来的工作及生活。句式运用准确，整篇文章除简单句和并列句外，作者还准确地运用宾语从句来表达自己的想法。
（指导教师：马艳红 ）
In the future， I think I will be a teacher. I will teach in the countryside. Because the kids there are very poor， I want to help them get better education.
As a teacher， I think I will try my best to teach them well. I will help them to open their eyes and know more about the world. I will also be friendly with them. And I will be their best friend. After class， we will play games together.
In my free time， I will go for a walk around the country. I will enjoy fresh air and the beauty of the countryside. On holidays， I will travel around the world. And I will buy some gifts for my students. This is my dream life in the future. I hope it will come ture.
简评：文章开篇点题说明自己所从事的职业是什么。作者想象力丰富，时态运用准确，整篇文章运用将来时来描述自己未来的工作及生活。句式运用准确，整篇文章除简单句和并列句外，作者还准确地运用宾语从句来表达自己的想法。
（指导教师：马艳红 ）