失误原因:偏离主题题目:不止一次,我努力尝试一考生自古以来,人类就面对着无数的挑战,在坎坷的道路上踉跄前行,在风雪与泥泞之中,与死神周旋。通过无数次的努力尝试,我们才勉强登上现在的高度,却也只是宇宙中的沧海一粟罢了。①文字优美,但是表意不明,转弯抹角,追求华丽的辞藻,离题千里。 Reasons for mistakes: Deviation from the topic topic: More than once, I tried to try a candidate. Since ancient times, mankind has faced countless challenges, walking on rough roads, swirling in snow and mud, and dealing with death. Through countless hard efforts, we barely boarded the current height, but only a tiny drop in the universe. ① beautifully written, but the meaning is unknown, roundabout, the pursuit of gorgeous rhetoric, away from the Trinidad.