雾虽逼人不进,而朦胧至美,装点春色,又感清风扑面,令人神爽。蓑衣笠,湖边留宾,奔于雾中,嬉笑玩耍,亦乐事也。至如登楼远眺,似白纱笼罩,浮于地面,萦绕于草木。日出雾渐散,亦别有一番美感。【点评】小作者通过仔细的观察,用古文对雾进行生动的描述,朦胧又有美感,表达出对雾的赞美之情。指导老师:钱立平 Although the fog intoxicating, and dim to the United States, decorated spring, but also feel the breeze blowing, it is refreshing.蓑 clothing Li, Lake guests, running in the fog, laughing play, but also happy things too. To ascend to the floor overlooking, like white silk shrouded in floating on the ground, haunt the vegetation. Sunrise fog gradually scattered, but also do not have some beauty. 【Comments】 Through the careful observation of small writers, the ancient description of the fog with a vivid, hazy and aesthetic, to express the praise of the fog. Instructors: Qian Liping