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就近几年中考英语试题来看，涉及休闲与娱乐话题的作文越来越多。
休闲与娱乐话题一般包括休闲活动、休闲场所、文娱活动、娱乐项目、文艺赛事、音乐、舞蹈、演出、游戏、电影、电视、研学旅游、艺术解读等等。
在写作中，我们不仅可以描述休闲与娱乐的益处，记录休闲与娱乐的活动过程，还可以就休闲与娱乐有关的内容作简要的说明并谈谈自己的感受等。
高频词语
A.休闲娱乐活动
①chat 聊天
②walk 散步
③listen to music 听音乐
④watch TV 看电视
⑤leisure activities 休闲活动
⑥sing and dance 唱歌跳舞
⑦play games 做游戏
⑧study trip 研学旅游
⑨go hiking 远足
⑩play basketball 打篮球
B.有关休闲娱乐的固定搭配
①be good for health 对健康有好处
②a healthy lifestyle 一种健康的生活方式
③keep fit 保持健康
④maintain a good mood 保持良好的心情
⑤make sb. healthy 使某人健康
提分句型
①Leisure activities， such as...， are good for our health. 休闲活动，诸如……，对我们的健康有好处。
②Many people work every day without enough relaxation.人们每天工作且得不到足够的放松。
③It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend. 我不推荐这种不健康的生活方式。
④I believe that people should try to keep a balance between work and leisure.我认为人们应该要努力维持工作和休闲的平衡。
⑤We should not do... Instead， we have to do... 我们不应该做……。相反，我们得去做……。
⑥Leisure activities can help us keep fit.休闲活动能帮助我们保持身体健康。
⑦We can focus on our studies.我们能集中精力学习。
⑧I believe that we should have more and more leisure activities to make us healthy. 我认为我们应该要有更多的休闲活动来使得我们变得健康。
话题模板
[①Leisure activities， such as ，
and ， are good for our health.
②Nowadays， many people without . It is . I believe that . People shouldnt . Instead， people have to . People can . People can also . Leisure activities can help people keep fit.
③All in all， I believe .]
佳作賞评
Leisure activities
Leisure activities， such as watching television， listening to music and traveling， are good for our health.
Nowadays， many people work every day without enough relaxation and leisure activities. It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend. I believe that people should do more activities and try to keep a balance between work and leisure. We， as students， should not sit at our desks and do homework all the time. Instead， we have to find some time for leisure activities such as walking and chatting with our friends. We can also play basketball， football， or pingpong with our friends. These sports and leisure activities can help us keep fit and maintain a good mood. Then we can focus on our studies.
All in all， I believe that we should have more and more leisure activities to make us healthy. 【权威点评】
这是一篇说明文。文章指出休闲活动对身体健康的好处，也相信人们会越来越关注休闲活动，以保持身体的健康。
全文中心突出，层次分明，语言精练，条理清晰。作者对话题的积极意义表述恰当，所介绍的休闲方法有可操作性。总之，这是一篇优秀的学生作文。
【思路解析】
首先，用列举法说明什么是休闲活动，并指出了休闲活动的重要性;然后，从反面介绍许多人一味地学习和工作，忽略了休闲活动，从而对身心健康带来不良的影响，并就此提出了一些可促使改善不良影响的休闲活动项目;最后，呼吁人们维持工作与休闲的平衡，保持身心健康。
★典题例解
请你根据下列内容提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1.你参与过或看过的一次歌唱比赛，以及你当时的感受。
2.同学们对参加歌唱比赛利弊的看法。
3.如有机会参加歌唱比赛，你会参加吗？
【写作提示】
1.审题立意
本文是一篇要求写一次参与过或看过的歌唱比赛的经历和感受的记叙文。行文时，要通过比赛经历、参赛的感悟（或看赛的经历和感悟）及同学们对这种娱乐活动的评价来表明自己的看法和观点。
2.布局谋篇
文章开头应要介绍曾经参与或目睹的歌唱比赛，可以用“It is my honor to...”等句型来表明自己有幸参与过或目睹过该活动。接下来，交代参赛选手的状况或与自己的（经历）作对比。比赛过程要叙述清楚，可夹叙夹议，以突出心理感受，然后指出比赛的结果和同学们的看法。最后，进一步表明自己对歌唱这种娱乐活动的看法和态度。
3.词句表达
词语
①take part in / compete in a singing contest 参加歌唱比赛
②competitor 参赛者;竞争者
③nervous 紧张的
④try ones best to do 竭力做某事
⑤calm down （使）平静
⑥improve ones self?confidence 增强某人的自信
⑦waste time 浪费时间
◆句型
①It is an honor that I had a chance... 很荣幸有……机会。
②I was the first / last one to do sth. 我第一个/最后一个做某事。
③I was waiting for my turn to do sth. 我等着轮到我做某事。
④I won the first / second... prize in the contest. 我获得了比赛的第一名/第二名/……。
⑤It is good for... to improve... skill. 這有利于……提高……技能。
4.语法建议
本文是写自己曾经参与或所见的一次歌唱比赛的经历，因此时态应以一般过去时为主。由于行文是作者自述，所以使用第一人称比较合适。
【参考范文】
It was a great honor that I had a chance to take part in a singing contest in our school last week.
There were ten competitors in our contest and I was the last one to sing. I was very nervous when I was waiting for my turn to sing because the other competitors all sang well. However， I tried my best to calm down myself. Finally， I won the second prize in the singing contest. Some of my classmates thought that the singing contest could improve our self?confidence while others thought that it wasted our study time.
If I have an opportunity to join in a television singing contest， I will take it because it is good for me to improve my singing skill.
★即时练笔
假设你叫李雷，请阅读加拿大网友Tommy的e?mail，然后给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Lei，
I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing， such as some places of interest， the environment， traffic and people there.
Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Tommy
就近几年中考英语试题来看，涉及休闲与娱乐话题的作文越来越多。
休闲与娱乐话题一般包括休闲活动、休闲场所、文娱活动、娱乐项目、文艺赛事、音乐、舞蹈、演出、游戏、电影、电视、研学旅游、艺术解读等等。
在写作中，我们不仅可以描述休闲与娱乐的益处，记录休闲与娱乐的活动过程，还可以就休闲与娱乐有关的内容作简要的说明并谈谈自己的感受等。
高频词语
A.休闲娱乐活动
①chat 聊天
②walk 散步
③listen to music 听音乐
④watch TV 看电视
⑤leisure activities 休闲活动
⑥sing and dance 唱歌跳舞
⑦play games 做游戏
⑧study trip 研学旅游
⑨go hiking 远足
⑩play basketball 打篮球
B.有关休闲娱乐的固定搭配
①be good for health 对健康有好处
②a healthy lifestyle 一种健康的生活方式
③keep fit 保持健康
④maintain a good mood 保持良好的心情
⑤make sb. healthy 使某人健康
提分句型
①Leisure activities， such as...， are good for our health. 休闲活动，诸如……，对我们的健康有好处。
②Many people work every day without enough relaxation.人们每天工作且得不到足够的放松。
③It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend. 我不推荐这种不健康的生活方式。
④I believe that people should try to keep a balance between work and leisure.我认为人们应该要努力维持工作和休闲的平衡。
⑤We should not do... Instead， we have to do... 我们不应该做……。相反，我们得去做……。
⑥Leisure activities can help us keep fit.休闲活动能帮助我们保持身体健康。
⑦We can focus on our studies.我们能集中精力学习。
⑧I believe that we should have more and more leisure activities to make us healthy. 我认为我们应该要有更多的休闲活动来使得我们变得健康。
话题模板
[①Leisure activities， such as ，
and ， are good for our health.
②Nowadays， many people without . It is . I believe that . People shouldnt . Instead， people have to . People can . People can also . Leisure activities can help people keep fit.
③All in all， I believe .]
佳作賞评
Leisure activities
Leisure activities， such as watching television， listening to music and traveling， are good for our health.
Nowadays， many people work every day without enough relaxation and leisure activities. It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend. I believe that people should do more activities and try to keep a balance between work and leisure. We， as students， should not sit at our desks and do homework all the time. Instead， we have to find some time for leisure activities such as walking and chatting with our friends. We can also play basketball， football， or pingpong with our friends. These sports and leisure activities can help us keep fit and maintain a good mood. Then we can focus on our studies.
All in all， I believe that we should have more and more leisure activities to make us healthy. 【权威点评】
这是一篇说明文。文章指出休闲活动对身体健康的好处，也相信人们会越来越关注休闲活动，以保持身体的健康。
全文中心突出，层次分明，语言精练，条理清晰。作者对话题的积极意义表述恰当，所介绍的休闲方法有可操作性。总之，这是一篇优秀的学生作文。
【思路解析】
首先，用列举法说明什么是休闲活动，并指出了休闲活动的重要性;然后，从反面介绍许多人一味地学习和工作，忽略了休闲活动，从而对身心健康带来不良的影响，并就此提出了一些可促使改善不良影响的休闲活动项目;最后，呼吁人们维持工作与休闲的平衡，保持身心健康。
★典题例解
请你根据下列内容提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1.你参与过或看过的一次歌唱比赛，以及你当时的感受。
2.同学们对参加歌唱比赛利弊的看法。
3.如有机会参加歌唱比赛，你会参加吗？
【写作提示】
1.审题立意
本文是一篇要求写一次参与过或看过的歌唱比赛的经历和感受的记叙文。行文时，要通过比赛经历、参赛的感悟（或看赛的经历和感悟）及同学们对这种娱乐活动的评价来表明自己的看法和观点。
2.布局谋篇
文章开头应要介绍曾经参与或目睹的歌唱比赛，可以用“It is my honor to...”等句型来表明自己有幸参与过或目睹过该活动。接下来，交代参赛选手的状况或与自己的（经历）作对比。比赛过程要叙述清楚，可夹叙夹议，以突出心理感受，然后指出比赛的结果和同学们的看法。最后，进一步表明自己对歌唱这种娱乐活动的看法和态度。
3.词句表达
词语
①take part in / compete in a singing contest 参加歌唱比赛
②competitor 参赛者;竞争者
③nervous 紧张的
④try ones best to do 竭力做某事
⑤calm down （使）平静
⑥improve ones self?confidence 增强某人的自信
⑦waste time 浪费时间
◆句型
①It is an honor that I had a chance... 很荣幸有……机会。
②I was the first / last one to do sth. 我第一个/最后一个做某事。
③I was waiting for my turn to do sth. 我等着轮到我做某事。
④I won the first / second... prize in the contest. 我获得了比赛的第一名/第二名/……。
⑤It is good for... to improve... skill. 這有利于……提高……技能。
4.语法建议
本文是写自己曾经参与或所见的一次歌唱比赛的经历，因此时态应以一般过去时为主。由于行文是作者自述，所以使用第一人称比较合适。
【参考范文】
It was a great honor that I had a chance to take part in a singing contest in our school last week.
There were ten competitors in our contest and I was the last one to sing. I was very nervous when I was waiting for my turn to sing because the other competitors all sang well. However， I tried my best to calm down myself. Finally， I won the second prize in the singing contest. Some of my classmates thought that the singing contest could improve our self?confidence while others thought that it wasted our study time.
If I have an opportunity to join in a television singing contest， I will take it because it is good for me to improve my singing skill.
★即时练笔
假设你叫李雷，请阅读加拿大网友Tommy的e?mail，然后给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Lei，
I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing， such as some places of interest， the environment， traffic and people there.
Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Tommy