近年来比较时髦上“如何写得有文采”的作文课,课上老师会给学生支很多招。但我们学生的作文真的有文采了吗?不久前,我有幸学习了国家级赛课《锤炼思想,学习写得有文采》,但课上学生的表现让我忧心。课进行得很顺畅,其中也涌现出一些学生颇为自得,老师颇为满意的作品。我挑选了两小段,请大家与我共同欣赏。段落一:当母亲告诉我这一个消息时,一切似乎灰暗了下来。仲春时节的煦风却恰似冬日里那般刻骨铭心,我却被强迫参 In recent years, more fashionable on the “how to write a literary grace ” composition class, class teacher will give students a lot of trick. But did our students’ essays really come from? Not long ago, I was fortunate enough to learn the national class “tempering ideas and learning to write well”, but I was worried about the performance of the students in the class. The classes went very smoothly, with some of the more satisfying works of the students appearing. I chose two short paragraphs, please share with me. Paragraph one: When the mother told me this one news, everything seems to be gloomy. Zhongxun season Xu Xian just like winter unforgettable, but I was forced Senate