春光明媚,喃喃清风抚细柳;夏日炎炎,荷花映日别样红;秋高气爽,丹桂细香云外飘;冬日寒凉,腊梅点缀琼枝摇。人生之路亦如这四季,每一处都有美丽的风景,我们只有踏好每一步,才能收获美景,收获灿烂的人生。(增加开头的排比句、比喻句,用生动优美的文字引出观点。将开头段的最后两句分化成下面的小论点,分别论证中心。)踏好每一步,我们需要从实践中获得真知。爱迪生曾说过:“一切伟大的发明皆出于实践。”他发明电灯时,光收集资料就用了两百多个笔记本。为了找到合适的灯丝,他先后试用了一千六百多种 Spring is bright, murmuring breeze caress fine willow; summer hot, lotus-like day of the other kind of red; autumn, Taniguchi fine cloud floating outside; winter cold, sweet plum ornament Qiongzhi shake. The road to life is like the four seasons, with beautiful scenery everywhere. Only by stepping in every step can we harvest the beauty and reap the brilliant life. (Add the clauses and metaphorical sentences at the beginning, and use the vivid and graceful words to lead the view.) Divide the last two sentences of the opening paragraph into the following small arguments to prove the center separately.) Step by step, we need to gain true knowledge from practice. Edison once said: “All great inventions come from practice.” "When he invented the lights, he used more than 200 notebooks to collect light. In order to find the right filament, he has tried more than 1600 kinds