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编者推荐:此文亮点是“妈妈特意去理发店精心修剪头发”——引导子女“学会感谢”——这有赖于此前用“妈妈的眉头皱了起来,生气地看着我”反衬,还有赖于此前用“买一只最漂亮的蝴蝶发夹给妈妈戴上”铺垫。此文还需要升格:将“精心修剪头发”展开描述;给全文“蝴蝶”加上双引号。此文可变格用于以“循循善诱”为主旨的材料作文。
Editor’s recommendation: The highlight of this article is “Mom deliberately went to the barber shop to carefully trim the hair ” - to guide the children “learn to thank” - this depends on “My mother’s brow wrinkled up and looked at me angrily ”Response, and rely on “ to buy a most beautiful butterfly hairpin to mother ” bedding. This article also needs to be upgraded: the description will be “carefully trimmed hair”; double quotes will be added to the full text “Butterfly”. This text can be used to compose essays that are based on the principle of “inclining and seduce”.