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在记叙文的写作中,故事情节的发展能够自圆其说是非常重要的。只有情节发展符合逻辑,故事主人公情感的变化符合人们的生活体验,文章才会得到读者的认同。而很多中学生由于生活阅历不足,思维欠周密,在作文时往往顾前不顾后,又限于篇幅,造成故事情节设计存在逻辑问题,前后脱节,甚至破绽百出,最终使文章不能取信于人,做作痕迹太重,造成失分。请看下面这个例子。
In narrative writing, the development of the storyline is very important to justify. Only the development of the plot is logical, and the change of the hero’s emotions conforms to people’s life experience. The article will be recognized by the readers. Many middle school students, due to their lack of life experience and lack of thoughtful thinking, tend to ignore the contents of their works and are limited in space. This has led to logic problems in the design of the story, and it has been irrelevant and even flawed. As a result, the article has failed to win the trust of others. Too heavy to cause loss of points. Please see the following example.