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下面是一份公文,在写作上存在诸多问题,现摘引原文,并评改如下。报告院领导:4月10日设备处召开了第二期“创优迎评”工程会议,校二期工程项目拨款开始启动,设备处要求我们在本月17日之前将二期方案送到设备处,争取拨款,由于外语教学楼搬迁及场地没法解决,我们的第一期拨款没怎么使用,我们应该克服上述方面的困难,力争第二期拨款到位,这样才能争取主动,更好地装备或更新我们的教学设备,使执行教学任务的老师能够通
The following is an official document, there are many problems in writing, now quoted the original, and the comment is as follows. Report House leaders: April 10 Equipment Division held the second phase of “excellence greeting” project meeting, the school started the second phase of the project appropriation, the equipment requires us on the 17th of this month before the two programs to send Due to the relocation of foreign language teaching buildings and the venue can not be solved, our first phase of appropriation is not used very much. We should overcome the above difficulties and strive for the second phase of appropriation so that we can take the initiative and better To equip or update our teaching facilities to enable teachers who carry out teaching tasks