论文部分内容阅读
“夫所谓文者,必有诸其中,是故君子慎其实。实之美恶,其发也不揜。本深而末茂,形大而声宏,行峻而言厉,心醇而气和。昭晰者无疑,优游者有余。体不备不可以为成人,辞不足不可以为成文。”——韩愈《答尉迟生书》一、从“文”看“人”1.缘起本次期中考试的作文题目很温馨——《一件幸福的事》。命题时考虑此题没有审题障碍,考生人人有话可说、有事可讲,并且在写作的过程中,考生可经历一次愉悦的情绪体验,使得考场里原本紧张的气氛也因之漫开缕缕甜蜜。而老师们在批阅评判作文的过程中也能看到孩子们对幸福的不同理解,分享孩子们的成长体验。可以预见,这次作文应该是一次从学生写作到老师评阅全过程都很开心的事情。
“Husband of the so-called literati, there must be one of them, so the gentleman cautious. Real beauty evil, its hair is not covered. And clear those who undoubtedly more than excellent swimmer body not prepared for adults, speech can not be written. ”- Han Yu Origin of the essay topic in this midterm is very warm - “a happy thing.” There is no obstacle to taking this issue into account when proposing a thesis. Everyone has something to say and everything can be said. In the process of writing, candidates can experience a pleasant emotional experience, so that the original atmosphere of tension in the examination room is also unpredictable. sweet. The teachers can also see the children’s different understanding of happiness in the course of criticizing the essay writing and share the experience of children’s growth. It is foreseeable that this essay should be a very happy thing from the students’ writing to the teacher’s review.