编者推荐:从文章所用的论据来看,最后自然段中的“从古到今”可改为“中外古今”,使其立论更鲜明地涵盖“地域”。“千手观音”的论据是从“心灵上的强者”的角度去运用的,应从“千手”——“心海(宽广)”的角度去运用它。还须锦上添花的是:文意偏于“心态”,未能突出“心态与成败”的某种关系。 Editor’s Recommendation: According to the arguments used in the article, the “from ancient times to the present” in the last paragraph of nature can be changed to “Chinese and foreign ancient and modern”, which makes it clearer to cover “geography”. The argument of “Avalokitesvara” is applied from the perspective of “the strong mind” and should be applied from the perspective of “Thousand Hands”-“Heart of the Sea (Broad)”. What’s more icing on the cake is that the literary style tends to be “mindset” and fails to highlight a certain relationship between “mindset and success”.