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病文呈现我心目中最重要的人李聪聪我是个独生女,父母的爱一滴不漏地全浇灌在了我身上,所以我时常耍些小脾气,从未考虑过别人的感受,特别是我心目中最重要的那个人——父亲。(开篇没把握好主体对象。)父亲是一个细心的人,特别是在对我的关心与照顾上。每当父亲有事要出门,他总担心我回家后找不到他,所以就主动在鞋架上留下一张便条,写清楚他去做什么了,好让我知道,不让我着急。(对父亲
The disease showed the most important person in my mind, Li Congcong. I was an only child. The love of my parents was completely poured on me. I always played with a little temper and never considered the feelings of others, especially in my mind. The important person - father. (The opening did not grasp the main subject.) The father is an attentive person, especially with regard to my concern and care. Whenever my father had something to go out, he always worried that I could not find him after returning home, so he took the initiative to leave a note on the shoe rack to clearly describe what he was doing, so that I knew that I would not be anxious. (to father