作文评语是作文教学的重要组成部分,也是提高学生写作技能的重要途径。但是,目前作文评语仍然存在一些亟待解决的实际问题,在众多实际问题中,作文评语针对性差尤为突出。究其原因主要是教师不重视、缺乏人文关怀等。针对该问题,提出一系列解决方法,期望能够改善目前作文评语针对性差的现状,优化作文评语。 Composition reviews are an important part of composition teaching and also an important way to improve students’ writing skills. However, there are still some practical problems that need to be solved in the current essay comments. Among the many practical problems, the compositional comments are particularly poorly targeted. The main reason is that teachers do not pay attention and lack humanistic care. To solve this problem, a series of solutions are proposed. It is hoped that the current status of poorly targeted composition comments can be improved and the essay comments can be optimized.