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一不同成分的错位公文中语序不当的问题比较复杂,本文试作归纳,并精选不同情形的实例进行评改。例句中有其他毛病的,顺便指出。(一)主语和谓语错位1.句子主谓成分错位【例1】今年,最为热门的科技领域当属智能可穿戴设备,众多此类产品纷纷亮相:智能眼镜、智能手表、智能手环等。后一分句主谓语序不当。另,首句主宾搭配不当。可修改为:“今年,科技领域最热门的产品当属智能可穿戴设备,众多此类产品——智
The problem of improper word order in a disparate official document with a different composition is rather complicated. This article tries to summarize and summarize the examples of different situations for review. There are other problems in the example sentence, by the way pointed out. (A) the subject and the predicate dislocation 1. Sentence main component dislocation [Example 1] This year, the most popular areas of science and technology belong to smart wearable devices, many of these products have appeared: smart glasses, smart watches, smart bracelets and so on. The last sentence of the order of propriety inappropriate. In addition, the first sentence of the main guest with improper. Can be changed to: ”This year, the hottest products in the field of science and technology came as smart wearable devices and many of these products -