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有这样一个小朋友,作文前,把一本《小学生作文词典》翻了个遍,将里面许多华丽优美的形容词挑选出来,像开中药方那样,一一抄在稿纸上,然后生吞活剥,便凑到文章里去。花了不少功夫,老师看了后却连连摇头,批评他是“堆砌词藻,华而不实”。后来他改变了方式,用自己熟悉的语言,写自己亲身经历的事,结果受到大家的好评。从此他懂得了写作文只有用自己的语文,写自己熟悉的生活,才能表达出自己的真情实感。
Have such a child, before the composition, the “primary school composition dictionary” over and over, many beautiful and beautiful inside the adjectives will be selected, like the traditional Chinese medicine side, copied one by one in the manuscript, and then devoured, then conspire Go inside the article Spent a lot of effort, but after reading the teacher but shook his head again and again, criticized him as “stacked words, flashy ”. Later, he changed the way, using his own familiar language, writing his own personal experience, the result was everyone’s praise. From then on he knew how to write the essay only in his own language, writing his familiar life, to express his true feelings.