小屋坐着小路躺着小小的人走着风声也听不到更何况落叶直到一缕炊烟,娜娜刀样升起无声的“静”又被无声地“破”了。闲情所致,只得闲景。诗人在静得出奇的静态中发现了“破”的动态。“刀样升起”的炊烟是全景的升华,也是精华。无深情厚意可谈。但字词精确,排列讲究,不失为小诗 Hut sitting on the path lying little man walking along with the wind can not hear not to mention the leaves until a ray of smoke, Nana knife-like silent “quiet” was silently “broken.” Leisure situation, only leisurely. The poet found the dynamic of “broken” in the still static and static state. The “knife-like rise” of smoke is the panorama of the sublimation, but also the essence. No deep feelings can talk about. However, the exact words, arranged stress, after all, poems