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点评评卷人读完本文,一定会感到本考生审题认真,思路清晰,文章条分缕析。第一段中心为:叔叔去开会,为对方带画;第二段中心为:请求对方帮忙接叔叔及叔叔的具体情况;第三段用了两个句子与前两段呼应,第一句表示感谢,第二段希望对方喜欢这幅画。如果对本文做以下改进,可以使文章更上一层楼:1.在首句中,把in your last letter放在句首能使本句话更顺畅;2.去掉第一段最后一句话及第三段最后的定语从句,因为这两句话实在没有必要,去掉后文章的长度正好,现在全文131个词,去掉这两处共13个词;3.时间表达出现了问题,英语中时间的表达应该是从具体小的时间点到大的时间点,“8月6日上午11:30”应为:at 11:30 am,August 6;4.出现了一处单词拼写错误:nember应改为:number.(李素艳)
Comments Reviewers finished reading this article, we will feel the examinee serious questions, clear thinking, article article analysis. The first paragraph of the center: the uncle went to the meeting, drawing for each other; the second paragraph of the center: ask the other party to help Uncle and uncle’s specific situation; the third paragraph of two sentences echoed the first two paragraphs, the first sentence Thank you, the second paragraph hope each other like this picture. If the following improvements to this article, you can make the article to the next level: 1. In the first sentence, put your last letter on the sentence can make this sentence more smoothly; 2. Remove the first paragraph of the last sentence and The third paragraph of the final attributive clause, because these two sentences is really unnecessary, removed the length of the article is just right now the full text of 131 words, remove the two a total of 13 words; 3 time expression problems, English time The expression should be from a specific small time point to a big time point, “” August 6, 11:30 am "should be: at 11:30 am, August 6; 4. A word spelling error has occurred: nember should be changed to: number. (Li Suyan)