此文写了提出问题和解决问题两个层面,特别难能可贵的是用“白胡子老爷爷”来解决问题--实则虚之--很有想象力。如果此文提出问题也采用这种写法,文章前后就和谐一致了。将洞察到现实生活本质的材料写入作品时,要从“雾”--“白胡子老爷爷”--中去看它,第六自然段中的“睡着”是无理而妙的:生活的真实是未曾“睡着”的,但梦境的真实是必须“睡着”的。 This article has written two aspects of asking questions and resolving them. It is particularly commendable to use “white beard old grandfather” to solve problems - but in reality it is imaginary - very imaginative. If this article asks questions, it is also written in this way. When the material that gives insight into the nature of real life is written into the work, look at it from “fog”--“white beard old grandfather ”--the “sleeping” in the sixth paragraph is Unreasonable and wonderful: The truth of life is never “sleeping”, but the reality of dreams must be “sleeping.”