编辑工作中 ,编辑与作者共同商榷最多的就是修稿问题。退修信是编辑与作者交流的桥梁 ,因而写好退修信尤其显得重要。笔者在工作实践中用系统方法指导退修信的写作 ,效果很好。1　系统分析1 1　要素从编辑方法论的角度看 ,可以将退修信看作一个系统 ,对此系统进行分析 ,其要素 Editing work, editors and writers discuss the most is the issue of manuscripts. Retirement letter is a bridge between editor and author, so it is particularly important to write a refund letter. The author in the practice of work using systematic methods to guide the writing of retreat letter, the effect is very good. 1 Systematic Analysis 1 1 Elements From the perspective of editorial methodology, the retreat letter can be viewed as a system on which the analysis of the system, its elements