写日记如果有“闻”必录,有“见”必写,事无巨细,面面俱到,不分主次,同样用力,这就很容易写成流水账。把日记写成流水账,打不破固定的条条框框,正是学生在日记写作中最常见的毛病。把日记写成流水账,一般说来大致有两种情况:一种是记人的日记,不分主次地罗列多件事情,每件事都是“蜻蜓点水式”的,没有一个明确的中心;一种是以时间为序的记事日记,只罗列一些表面的生活现象。表面上看,似乎交代得很清楚,从头到尾一一写来,好像很完整,实际上未明确表达重 Write a diary if there is “smell ” will be recorded, “See ” must be written, everything size, everything, regardless of primary and secondary, the same force, it is easy to write a running account. Writing a diary as a running account can not break through the fixed rules and regulations, which are the most common problems students have in diary writing. The diary written as a running account, generally speaking, there are roughly two cases: one is a diary of the record, regardless of the primary and secondary to list many things, everything is “superficial”, there is no clear center One is a chronicle diary that lists only some superficial life phenomena. On the face of it, it seems that we have made it very clear that writing from beginning to end is as complete as possible without actually articulating