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上一期,我们用高标准去分析一篇写得不错的作文,并在此基础上,通过两种习作技巧,让自己的作文水平再上一个台阶,那么还有没有这样的方法呢?有的,别急!今天带给大家的是一种常见的习作技巧。这种技巧,同样可以让原本平淡无味的文章增色不少噢!所谓细节粗糙,是指在创作文章的时候,在细节的描绘和刻画上过于随意,没有好好打磨作品,使得原本可以展现人物风采或精彩过程的内容没能得以展现,从而使文章难以称得上是优秀。
In the last issue, we used a high standard to analyze a well-written essay. On the basis of this, we can use two kinds of skills to make our essay level to the next level. Is there any such way? There are Do not worry! It is a common practice skill to bring to you today. This technique, the same can make the original bland article a lot of color Oh! The so-called details of the rough, refers to the creation of the article, the details of the description and portrayal of too casual, not polished work, making the original character can show Or wonderful process of content can not be demonstrated, so that the article is hard to be called excellent.