附示十词,弟以为浪淘沙、满江红二阙最佳,题材既新,运用现世语言亦甚熟练;次为诉衷情一阙,亦佳。余词平平。所谓平者,以词与意皆前人用过、道过,非新构也。弟与此道,已抛荒四十余年,不特手底荆棘而已,所言固不足据。玉楼春词甚佳,感旧而不萧瑟,念逝而不衰飒,适可而止,恰到好处。所谈佛法,却是哲理,我于此都无研究,不能与兄反复。唯“道”之一字,窃意不 Attached to the ten words, brother that wave Langsha, Azolla second Que best, the subject is new, the use of the world language is also very skilled; The remaining words are flat. The so-called flat, with the word and meaning are used by predecessors, Road, non-new structure also. Brother and this road, has been abandoned for more than 40 years, not the end of thorns only, the assertion is insufficient. Yulou very good word of the Spring Festival, the sense of old rather than bleak, die without fail Sa, enough, just right. The Dharma we talk about is philosophy. I have not studied anything here and can not repeat it with my brother. Only “Road ” one word, stealing meaning is not