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我的妈妈有不同的感情。时而愤怒,时而高兴,时而悲伤……我无心一说,都能得到她的表情回复。如果参加表情比赛的话,谁也胜不过她。(新颖的开头,点出妈妈表情丰富的特点。)有一次,我和妈妈顶嘴,而(“而”删除)就因为一本书。可她还不放过我,双手撑腰,眉头紧皱,脸上挂着深沉(生气?)的表情,嘴里不停的(地)唠叨着,让我害怕不已。(你观察得十分仔细,把妈妈生气的样子写得真形象。)有一次,我和妈妈在看电视,我塞给她一颗甜甜的水果糖,这时,在她脸上显
My mom has different feelings. Sometimes angry, sometimes happy, sometimes sad ... ... I have no mood to say, can get her expression reply. If you participate in the expression contest, who wins but she. (At the beginning of the novel, point out the expressive features of the mom.) Once, my mom and meep, and ( “and ” delete) because of a book. But she still let go of me, his hands on his back, brow wrinkled, his face hung deep (angry?) Expression, his mouth kept (and) nagging, let me scared endless. (You look very carefully and write the image of your mom angry.) Once, my mum and I were watching TV, and I stuffed her with a sweet fruity candy. At this moment,