载体独特,先“一般”后“特殊”。平常“姥姥坐在小板凳上”剥;临别前夜“姥姥面前摆着一袋剥好了的南瓜籽仁,借着微弱的灯光,弯着腰,静静地剥着”。倒数第二自然段中的“等着我”,应删除——当时姥姥还在世!此文主旨多元,可变格用于“童年”材料作文,变格措施是:不将“姥姥到了天堂”作为前文的潜台词,增补姥姥转述“南瓜籽仁”的童话。 Unique carrier, first “general” after “special”. Normally “squatted on a small bench” and peeled off; on the eve of parting, “a bag of peeled pumpkin seeds was placed in front of the pelicans. With a faint light, he bent and quietly peeled.” The “waiting for me” in the penultimate paragraph should be deleted - it was still alive at the time! The subject of this article is pluralistic, and the variable lattice is used in the “childhood” material composition. The unconventional measure is: “Wonderful to heaven.” As the subtext of the previous text, supplemented by the narration of “Pumpkin Seeds” fairy tales.