在公文语病中,定语多余和残缺的现象比较突出,本文试作归纳和实例评改。例句中有其他毛病的,顺便指出。一定语多余实例评改(一)赘加定语导致词义重复【例1】检察人员在其家中发现很多巨额财产。“巨额”即很大的数量,和“很多”词义重复,宜删去“很多”。【例2】严厉打击各种严重刑事犯罪活动是 In the official language syllabus, the phenomenon of attributive redundancy and incompleteness is more prominent. This article tries to summarize and evaluate the examples. There are other problems in the example sentence, by the way pointed out. Fixed Assets Exaggeration (a) Increasing attributive level leads to repetition of semantic meanings 【例 1】 Prosecutors find a lot of huge amounts of property in their homes. “Huge” is a large number, and “many” repeated meaning, should be deleted “many ”. [Example 2] Severe crackdowns on various serious criminal activities are