太阳公公疲倦地回家去了,彩霞姑娘在西天上织出了火红的锦缎,在她的映衬下,田野上一派令人神往的景象。(运用拟人的手法,既巧妙地交待了时间,又妙趣横生,让人回味。)燕儿在田野上飞来飞去,似乎(“似乎”一词用得好,表明是作者的猜测。)也爱上了这晚霞,久久不愿归巢。河岸上,一排排柳树姑娘,伸着她们的臂膀,妩媚 The sun prodigy tired to go home, Caixia girl in western sky woven a red damask, in her background, the field was a fascinating scene. (Using anthropomorphic techniques, we are both clever to account for the time, yet fun and memorable.) Yan Er flew in the fields, seems ( “seems ” well used, indicating that the author's guess. ) Also fell in love with this sunset, a long time unwilling to homing. River banks, rows of willow trees girl, stretched their arms, charming