去年十月里的某一起学生的练笔。天,我趁值夜班批改徐雅男同学的《女中一千天》从码得高高的一叠本子中『跳』,出来。我被娓娓讲述的女中故事吸引了,一气连读两遍,并划上一条条浪线。那晚,若是独处一室,文中多处有趣的细节会逗引我叫出声来。我破天荒地打了『双优』——丝毫不想掩饰我的赞赏,不想保持作为教师的矜持。美,需要肯定。现在发表的文字,面目上已与初稿相去迥然。规模扩展至原先的三倍,散文体已蜕变成小说,行文则依然灵动流利而有生气。这其中 A student’s practice in October last year. Days, I read the night shift correction Xu Ya Nan’s “female thousand days” from the high stack of books in the “jump” out. I was drawn to the story of the girl who told me about it, reading it twice in a row and drawing a wave. That night, if you were alone in the room, interesting details in the text would make me yell. I hit “Double Excellence” for the first time - I didn’t want to disguise my admiration, and I didn’t want to remain as a teacher. The United States needs affirmation. The text that is now published has already gone visibly with the first draft. The scale has expanded to three times its original size, prose style has become a novel, and writing is still fluent and lively. some of