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What will the future be like？ Do you want to know about it？ Now let me tell you！
In the future， people will have a lot of robots in their homes. They will help us do many dangerous， difficult or boring jobs. For example， robots will be used to do housework and cook meals and so on. People won’t need to go out to the supermarket. Because robots will be able to help us with shopping. And kids won’t go to school. They will study at home on computer. What an easy life it is！For this kind of life ，we must try our best to do everything that we should do well. Then we can make our dream come true.
All in all，as long as we can study hard now，I think life in the future will be colorful and wonderful.
简评：
文章结构合理，采用了“总分总”的三段式结构。学生发挥了自己的想象力，并使用了流畅的语言表达了对未来生活的向往，文笔自然大方、可读性强，是一篇较好的初中生英语习作。如果能在内容上加以充实，想象力再丰富一些效果会更好。
指导教师：李广东
In the future， people will have a lot of robots in their homes. They will help us do many dangerous， difficult or boring jobs. For example， robots will be used to do housework and cook meals and so on. People won’t need to go out to the supermarket. Because robots will be able to help us with shopping. And kids won’t go to school. They will study at home on computer. What an easy life it is！For this kind of life ，we must try our best to do everything that we should do well. Then we can make our dream come true.
All in all，as long as we can study hard now，I think life in the future will be colorful and wonderful.
简评：
文章结构合理，采用了“总分总”的三段式结构。学生发挥了自己的想象力，并使用了流畅的语言表达了对未来生活的向往，文笔自然大方、可读性强，是一篇较好的初中生英语习作。如果能在内容上加以充实，想象力再丰富一些效果会更好。
指导教师：李广东