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要求：新的学期开始了，你打算如何计划自己的学习和生活，请写一篇短文来介绍一下。
New term is coming. I’m going to make four resolutions for the new term.
First， I want to improve my English. I think English is one of the most important subjects. So I’m going to practice English and keep on reading English every day.
Second， I’m going to take up drawing as a hobby. So I’m going to join an art club. I hope I can draw very well. Maybe I will be an artist in the future.
Third， I want to read more books this term. I think reading books can help me know more knowledge. So I’m going to read for an hour every day.
My fourth resolution has to do with my physical health. I want to be healthier. So I’m going to exercise every day， like running， swimming and playing volleyball. I’m also going to eat more vegetables and less junk food.
These are the things I’m going to do this term. I will try my best to achieve them.
简评：文章先介绍的是自己的新学期打算，并且在叙述要采取的行动时，很有条理，结构完整。句式多样，句子结构基本正确，简单句、并列句和复合句并用增强了文章的色彩。整篇文章准确地运用了一般现在时和将来时。
（指导教师：马艳红 ）
New term is coming. I’m going to make four resolutions for the new term.
First， I want to improve my English. I think English is one of the most important subjects. So I’m going to practice English and keep on reading English every day.
Second， I’m going to take up drawing as a hobby. So I’m going to join an art club. I hope I can draw very well. Maybe I will be an artist in the future.
Third， I want to read more books this term. I think reading books can help me know more knowledge. So I’m going to read for an hour every day.
My fourth resolution has to do with my physical health. I want to be healthier. So I’m going to exercise every day， like running， swimming and playing volleyball. I’m also going to eat more vegetables and less junk food.
These are the things I’m going to do this term. I will try my best to achieve them.
简评：文章先介绍的是自己的新学期打算，并且在叙述要采取的行动时，很有条理，结构完整。句式多样，句子结构基本正确，简单句、并列句和复合句并用增强了文章的色彩。整篇文章准确地运用了一般现在时和将来时。
（指导教师：马艳红 ）