【真题】请以“老师走后”为题写一篇600字以上的记叙文。【思路点拨】这道命题作文将写作的触角伸向了校园生活,对于每天与老师打交道的学生来说,应该有话可写,学生思维的闸门很容易打开。但从考试情况来看,出彩的文章屈指可数,甚至不少同学写作走入了误区。我认为,这是审题不清,没有深度挖掘,仓促成文所致。越是貌似好写的文题考生越容易掉以轻心,因为贴近自己的生活,话匣子一旦打开,就如竹筒倒豆子一般,一发不可收拾,而 【Zhenti】 Please write a more than 600 words narrative after “teacher walked behind”. 】 【Ideas point of this proposition writing will be writing tentacles stretched to the campus life, for students dealing with the teacher every day, there should be something to write, the gate of student thinking is very easy to open. However, judging from the examination, there are only a handful of articles out of color, and even many of my classmates have gone into misunderstanding. In my opinion, this is due to unclear exams, in-depth mining and hastily written articles. The more seemingly easy to write the article the more likely candidates to take it lightly, because close to their own lives, when the chatterbox opened, just like a bamboo down the beans in general out of control, and