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My name is Guo congcong. I′m fifteen this year.
I am a middle school student. I study at No. 2 Middle School. I live in a beautiful village named Jia he. My village is near the Guo River. I am from the town of Weishi, Kaifeng City, Henan province. My home town is a beautiful place for living. My village has a huge change these years. In my village, there are a lot of trees on the street. Buildings you can see here and there. The streets are wide, tidy and clean very much. And the air is very fresh. In the morning many men or women come out for sports.
In my village there are many supermarkets. If you want to buy something, you can go there. And the things are both good and cheap. Or if you want to learn something, you can go to the museum. Kids enjoy the science museum, and teenagers love the sports museum.
There are four seasons in a year in my hometown. In spring the trees turn green and the flowers come out. Usually I like to fly kites with my good friends in the open air andsometimes go to Bianjing Park. I can see many animals in the zoo there. In summer I like to swim in the Guo River with my little partner. The water is very clean. We all like swimmig. In Autumn, I like get groups with my parents, and we can eat watermelon. Oh, I forget to tell you, in my hometown, we plant wheat, corn and others. In winter when it snows, our village becomes nicer.
Do you want to live here?Welcome!
点评
1. 优点:
该文作者描述了自己家乡改革开放后喜人的变化,抒发了自己热爱家乡,热爱生活的思想感情,尤其是作者对自己家乡一年四季生活情景的描述,如一幅优美的生活画卷展现在读者眼前。全文流畅自然,彰显童趣。
2. 不足之处:
文章结尾不妨反问一下: Dear friends, do you think that my hometown is very beautiful?
本期点评教师:
曹体瑞 男,中共党员,初中英语把关教师。现年四十三岁,从事英语教学二十二年,具有丰富的英语教学经验。曾发表市级以上英语教学文章六篇,并自创英语趣味教法。荣获过市级优质课和市级优秀辅导教师、县级优秀班主任等。
I am a middle school student. I study at No. 2 Middle School. I live in a beautiful village named Jia he. My village is near the Guo River. I am from the town of Weishi, Kaifeng City, Henan province. My home town is a beautiful place for living. My village has a huge change these years. In my village, there are a lot of trees on the street. Buildings you can see here and there. The streets are wide, tidy and clean very much. And the air is very fresh. In the morning many men or women come out for sports.
In my village there are many supermarkets. If you want to buy something, you can go there. And the things are both good and cheap. Or if you want to learn something, you can go to the museum. Kids enjoy the science museum, and teenagers love the sports museum.
There are four seasons in a year in my hometown. In spring the trees turn green and the flowers come out. Usually I like to fly kites with my good friends in the open air andsometimes go to Bianjing Park. I can see many animals in the zoo there. In summer I like to swim in the Guo River with my little partner. The water is very clean. We all like swimmig. In Autumn, I like get groups with my parents, and we can eat watermelon. Oh, I forget to tell you, in my hometown, we plant wheat, corn and others. In winter when it snows, our village becomes nicer.
Do you want to live here?Welcome!
点评
1. 优点:
该文作者描述了自己家乡改革开放后喜人的变化,抒发了自己热爱家乡,热爱生活的思想感情,尤其是作者对自己家乡一年四季生活情景的描述,如一幅优美的生活画卷展现在读者眼前。全文流畅自然,彰显童趣。
2. 不足之处:
文章结尾不妨反问一下: Dear friends, do you think that my hometown is very beautiful?
本期点评教师:
曹体瑞 男,中共党员,初中英语把关教师。现年四十三岁,从事英语教学二十二年,具有丰富的英语教学经验。曾发表市级以上英语教学文章六篇,并自创英语趣味教法。荣获过市级优质课和市级优秀辅导教师、县级优秀班主任等。