老舍先生是小说大家,是塑造人物的高手,他告诉我们一个描写的秘诀:只有描写动作,人物才能立起来。作家莱辛也说:“主要的东西是让人行动起来,通过动作显示人物的性格特征。”那么,动作描写的神奇作用具体表现在哪些方面呢?有画面感,能使被刻画的人物像影视画面一样,活跃在读者面前。如朱自清的《背影》里写父亲爬月台的动作:我看见他戴着黑布小帽,穿着黑布大马褂,深青布棉袍,蹒跚地走到铁道边,慢慢探身下去,尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道,要爬上那边月台,就不容易了。他用两手攀着上面,两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微 Mr. Lao She is the novelist, is a master of character, he told us a description of the secret: Only describe the action, the characters can stand up. The author Lessing also said: “The main thing is to make people move through action to show the character’s personality.” “So, the magic of action description of the specific performance in what areas? A sense of the picture, can be portrayed People like the video screen, active in front of readers. Such as Zhu Ziqing’s ”back" to write his father climb the platform action: I saw him wearing a black cloth cap, wearing a black cloth jacket, dark cloth cotton robe, hobbled to the railroad side, slowly lean forward, not big difficult. But he crossed the railway, to climb the platform over there, it is not easy. He climbed above with both hands, his feet upwards again; his obese body leftwards