2010年3月8日诗人张枣在德国图宾根大学医院因病去世,年仅四十七岁。他的好友诗人柏桦写下了两万余字的悼念长文《张枣》,同时有一首悼念的诗作《忆江南:给张枣》。他将此诗于4月30日发给诗人潘洗尘。后又于5月1日、5月3日、5月4日、5月27日四次发出修正稿,对个别诗行,有时是个别字进行调整。我们将一、五稿发在刊物上,并对四次修改加以简要说明,看诗人柏桦是如何对待一首诗的。 March 8, 2010 Poet Zhang Zao died of illness at the University Hospital Tuebingen in Germany, at the age of 47. His friend poet Bai Hua wrote more than 20,000 words in memory of the long article “Zhang jujube,” while a memorial to the memory of “Jiangnan memories: to Zhang date.” He sent this poem to the poet Pan Dust on April 30. Later on May 1, May 3, May 4, May 27 issued a revised version four times, individual poems, and sometimes individual words to be adjusted. We will publish one or five draft publications, and four amendments to a brief description of how the poet Bai Hua treatment of a poem.