一、由纲导入师:“课标”要求,“作文要观点明确,内容充实,感情真实健康”。这里的“内容充实”指的是什么?生(1):所谓内容充实就是材料丰富,形象丰满。师:说得好!对写人记叙文来说就是人物有血有肉,有个性特点,有复杂的思想感情和丰富的精神世界。不过在平时的习作中,不少同学总习惯以叙述、说明代替描写,内容干瘪而不充实,形象自然乏味。那么如何才能写出内容充实的记叙文呢。请看下面的一篇习作,读一读,想一想,文章写的主要内容是什么?文章的成功、不足之处在哪里,该如何修改呢?(放投影片:《本色》)二、病文阅读本色夕阳下,一位老人站在基前。阵阵微风,从身旁掠过,勾起他无限的思绪。三十年前,老人接查一桩经济命案。经过几十昼 First, the introduction of division by the program: “course standard” requirements, “composition should be clear, content enrichment, real emotional health ”. What is meant by “content enrichment” here? Health (1): The so-called content enrichment is rich in material and full of image. Teacher: Well said! For writers narrative texts are characters with blood and flesh, personality characteristics, complex thoughts and feelings and a rich spiritual world. However, in the usual exercises, many students are always used to narrative, description instead of description, content is dry and not full, the image is naturally boring. How can we write a full-text narrative? Please read the following article, read it, think about it, what is the main content of the article, and where is the success or inadequacy of the article? How can I modify it? (Presentation slide: “Character”) II. An old man stood in front of the base in the sunset of the sickness reading. The breeze swept past him and brought back his infinite thoughts. Thirty years ago, the old man investigated an economic murder case. After dozens of miles