在我们的生活中,一定接触过许多人:爸爸、妈妈、老师等,也有一些人,虽然接触不多,却给你留下了深刻的印象。在一堂作文课上,我让学生从接触过的许多人中,选择一个熟悉的人来写。结果交上来的作文我一看,发现都按这种套路在写:先写人物外貌,再加一件事情。而且写出的人物都像一个模子刻出来的,没有个性,不够鲜活。 In our life, we have had contact with many people: father, mother, teacher, etc. There are also some who, though not much contact, left a deep impression on you. In an essay class, I asked students to choose a familiar person from the many people they met. The results of the composition I submitted to see and found that according to this routine are written: first write character appearance, plus one thing. And write the characters are carved out as a model, no personality, not fresh enough.