完美的交响乐,如同细细编织的锦缎,离不开互动与配合,倾听与挥洒。学生写作与名师点评的穿插是创造和鉴赏的结合,最和谐的交响乐由此缓缓流淌而出。这应该是一种很难言说的感觉,从记忆的深处飘来,或浓郁或淡雅,既抽象又具体。它在风中飞扬,在舌尖上舞蹈,在回忆中发酵。一旦它被我们 Perfect symphony, like a fine braided damask, can not do without interaction and coordination, listening and swaying. The combination of student writing and teacher commentary is a combination of creation and appreciation, whereby the most harmonious symphony is slowly flowing. This should be a very unspeakable feeling, floating from the depths of memory, or rich or elegant, abstract and concrete. It flies in the wind, dance on the tongue, and ferment in memory. Once it is us