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  工作之余或周末假日,我们免不了有些应酬和交往。或与亲人聚聚,或与朋友聊聊,或与同事去餐厅共度周末。这些都是极为平常的社会往来。既是往来,就免不了邀请和被邀请,因此邀请和被邀请便成了日常交往的必要礼仪之一。所以,掌握一些与邀请相关的英语表达,不仅是学习的需要,也是社会交往的需要。
  请看下面的作文要求:
  假如你叫李明,请你写一封邀请信,邀请你的同学John跟你一起度暑假。内容:自从上次你们在北京见面以后,已经有很长一段时间了,你想用英语跟他一起聊聊他在学校的生活和学习情况。
  【学生习作】
  Dear John,
  Summer holiday is coming. ①Im glad to invite you to my summer vacation. I want to see you very much.
  Its a long time since we ②meet last time in Beijing. ③I would like to talk with you about your situation in school. We can talk about your life and your learning. ④Whats more, we can chat in English. I think its very interesting. Whats your opinion?
  Im looking forward to your reply.
  Yours,
  Li Ming
  【老師点评】
  小作者对作文要求把握得非常好,文章要点都包括在内了。对书信的格式也掌握得很好。文章条理清楚,语句基本通顺,语言简练,句子结构完整,结束语用得恰到好处。美中不足的是有几个句子表达不够准确。①处应说Im glad to invite you to spend the summer vacation with me.。 ②处meet应改成met,因为在此句型中,since后面应该用一般过去时的句子。③处不太确切,应说I would like to hear about your life and study in school.,注意应把learning改成study,因为study既是动词,也是名词。④处的Whats more用得不错。 通过这篇作文我们可以得到一个启示:学习、背诵、使用一些熟悉、地道的英语句子,而不是自己根据汉语习惯生造的一些句子,能使文章更生动。
  【命题分析】
  (1)认真审题。从题目要求可以看出这是一封书信,首先要注意书信的格式。(2)确定要点。① 要注意邀请的表达方式。② 邀请你的同学John一起度暑假。③ 自从你们上次在北京见面以后,已经有很长一段时间了。④ 你想用英语跟他一起聊聊他在校的生活和学习情况。(3)确定时态。由于是对暑假生活的安排,所以时态要用一般将来时。(4)检查全文。检查时应着重以下内容:①动词的时态和语态;②单词拼写;③冠词、介词用法;
  ④语序;⑤名词的数与主谓一致;⑥句意与语法的一致性;⑦标点、格式、字数等。
  【参考例文】
  Dear John,
  Ill be very happy if you can come and spend several days with me during the coming summer holiday. Its so long time since we met each other in Beijing and Im eager to hear about your life and studies in school. We can have an English talk together. Do hope you can come.
  Good luck with your studies.
  Yours,
  Li Ming
  【归纳拓展】
  下面是一些邀请时可能用上的表达:
  1. 提出邀请
  What about playing football with us? 和我们一起踢足球怎么样?
  Do come to play with us tomorrow. 明天一定和我们一起玩啊!
  Would you like to have dinner with us this evening? 今天晚上想和我们一起吃晚饭吗?
  Do you feel like taking a walk now? 现在你想散步吗?
  Wont you come in and sit down? 进来坐坐吧!
  Id like to invite you to have dinner this Saturday, Mr Smith. 史密斯先生,这周六我想请你吃饭。
  Next Sunday is my birthday. Can you come to my party? 下周日是我的生日,你能来参加我的聚会吗?
  I hope you can come to my birthday party next Friday. 我希望下周五你能来我的生日聚会。
  用法点津:①在发出“邀请”前常有一个引子,尤其在客气的场合,如可先这样问一下对方是否有空:Are you free this evening?
  ②Would you like to...?和Id like to invite you to...的句式较为客气,带有商量、询问的口气,多用于不知对方能否接受邀请的场合。   2. 接受邀请与拒绝邀请
  Yes, Id like to. / Yes, great. / Sure. Thats a good idea. / Yes, with pleasure. / Thats very kind of you. Thank you. / Sure, why not? Ill be glad to. / That sounds nice (great).
  Id love to, but Im afraid I cant. / I wish I could, but Im too busy. / Thank you, but Im afraid I must finish my homework first.
  用法点津:①接受他人邀請时通常还要表示一下感谢。
  ② 如果是稍有保留地接受,可这样说:I will if I can. / Its very kind of you to invite me, but Im not sure if I can come.
  ③ 拒绝他人的邀请一般不直接说No,而要婉言谢绝,并要声明自己是愿意接受“邀请”的,但因某种原因不能接受,并表示歉意或感谢。
  注意:西方人举办party时,总要邀请亲朋好友参加。如果他们邀请那些不是很熟悉的朋友,往往在举办party前的一两个星期提出,以便对方能调整他们的时间表。参加party时,既不可去得太早,也不能迟到。另外,party结束后,要向举办者表示感谢,感谢他们的盛情款待。当然,也可以等回家后给举办者打个电话、发个邮件等以示感谢。
  【趁热打铁】
  任务一、将下面句子编成一段对话,用序号标明顺序。
  ____ Its starting at seven oclock.
  ____ Oh, great. Ill come. Thanks.
  ____ Hi, Gina! Do you have time next Sunday?
  ____ What time is it?
  ____ Can you come to my birthday party?
  ____ Ill finish my homework next Sunday afternoon, but Im free in the evening.
  任务二、根据提示写一封信:假如你叫梅梅,下星期六是中秋节,你邀请你的朋友莉莉和露西到你家过中秋节。晚饭7点钟开始,你家在文明路8号,可以乘10路公共汽车在第六站下车。车站旁边的一栋红色的楼就是。
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