《山中访友》一文是一篇非常优美的散文,作者用心引领我们去体会自然之美,诗情浓郁,令人陶醉。但白璧微瑕,其中第七自然段有违事理,在此提出,以供商榷。“忽然下起雷阵雨,像有一千个侠客在天上吼叫,又像有一千个喝醉了酒的诗人在云头朗诵,又感动人又有些吓人。赶快跑到一棵老柏树下,慈祥的老柏树立即撑起了大伞。满世界都是雨,惟我站立的地方没有雨,却成了看雨的好地方,谁 The article “Friends in the Mountains” is a very beautiful prose. The author carefully guides us to experience the beauty of nature. It is full of poetic and intoxicating. However, in the light of the slightest misfortune, the seventh paragraph of nature violated the law and was put forward here for trade. "Suddenly there was a thundershower, like a thousand knights yelling in the sky, and a thousand drunk poets reading in the clouds, moving people and some scary. They ran off to an old cypress, kindly. The old cypress tree immediately propped up the big umbrella.The world was full of rain, but the place where I stood was not rain, but it became a good place to see the rain.