《感悟亲情》是一篇网络作文评改课。试图从案例的背景、设计、分析三个方面,初步探索网络在作文评改教学中的作用。试图利用网络这一平台,改变往日作文批改、讲评全由教师一力承担的“包办”模式,以学生为主体,充分调动学生的积极性和能动性,从而提高作文教学的实效性和趣味性,同时对网络作文教学的利弊提出几点思考。 “Sentiment affection” is a network essay review class. Trying to explore the role of internet in the teaching of composition evaluation from the aspects of background, design and analysis of the case. Trying to use network as a platform to change the previous essay reform, commenting on the “all-encompassing” mode which is entirely undertaken by the teachers, taking the students as the main body and fully mobilizing the enthusiasm and initiative of the students so as to improve the effectiveness and interest of the teaching of composition At the same time, some suggestions on the pros and cons of online composition teaching are put forward.