批改学生作文,我们通常可以发现,常见的问题是作文感情平淡、内容空洞,好似一个人只有骨架子,却缺乏充实的内脏和流动的新鲜血液。找其原因,学生回答绞尽脑汁,冥思苦想也是想把作文写得生动、形象,有血有肉,可总不得法。如果教师能把“移情”巧妙地运用到指导学生写作上来,一般 In correcting student essay, we can usually find out that the common problem is the plain feeling of writing, the empty content, just like one has only skeleton, but lack of full of internal organs and flowing fresh blood. Find the reason for the students to rack their brains, meditation is also want to write the composition vivid, image, flesh and blood, may not be law. If teachers can “empathy” skillfully used to guide students writing up, in general