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★评委意见:作者动人地为我们描绘了一个个和好朋友在一起的场景,字里行间荡漾着清澈美好的纯真友谊。记忆留存下的,是那银铃般的笑声和奶白色的小裙子。各奔东西的结局是温暖中的一丝悲伤,但却无法抹杀那份最初的美好。(何雨伟)蛋青色的阳光洒进屋子里,背着光的你,笑容已不那么分明,我的耳边只剩下你串串银铃般的笑声。思来想去,记忆里的你永远在笑。我的朋友,你在何方?与你初识是在一个深秋。我是一个刚刚来到新城市的孩子。离开了那
★ Judge Opinion: The author paints a scene depicting us together with good friends, with clear and beautiful innocent friendship among the lines. Remaining in memory is the silver bell-like laughter and the milky little skirt. Each end of the game is a trace of sadness in the warmth, but it can not be denied the original beauty. (He Yuwei) Egg blue sun splashed into the room, carrying the light of you, the smile is not so clear, my ear only your string of silver bell-like laughter. Thought to want to go, remember you are always laughing. My friend, where are you? I am a kid who has just arrived in a new city. Left it