现代高中生的心态与作文教学是相辅相承的,常言道:“教书育人”。现实中的语文教学,尤其是作文指导往往是:“备课不备人”。正如学生编的顺口溜:“作文难,难作文,下笔无言难成文;头儿空,肚儿空,守来空去空对空。”因此高中生作文的”难”与“空”,似乎就成了学生作文与教师评文的两个基本点了。 The mentality of modern senior high school students and composition teaching supplement each other. As the saying goes: “Teaching and educating people.” In reality, Chinese language teaching, especially composition instruction, is often: “Preparation of classes is not prepared.” Just as the students made jingles: “It’s difficult to write, it’s difficult to write, and it’s difficult to write a speech without a word; the head is empty, the belly is empty, and the air is empty.” So the “difficult” and “empty” of the high school student’s composition seems to be It became the two basic points of student writing and teacher commentary.